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[w00tiful]

keywords castles in the sky, envious, pure, sought after, glorious

Okaaay, so I know this is really early and long, but I thought I would enjoy the last few moments of summer's freedom while I could.

I like this one, a lot.

About 2000 words, PG-13 for excessive use of the word "fuck," and featuring Zack as a bad writer with romantic ideals.

Comments

[siren_mage]

Eeeeek!!!! It was so fucking awesome and I can't even choose a favorite part or quote or anything cuz I loved it so much and right after this I'm probably going to go read it again. And, andandandandand, I not only love you because this was so good but because I love my keywords. I totally know what to write . . . yes! Anyway, great job, enjoy school, and I'm off to read and write. ^.^

[invisibleflames]

Aww, I really liked this!

And when Freddy came out of the bathroom completely naked except for "Happy fucking birthday, now fuck me" written appropriately crooked on his chest, Zack had just enough time to realize both how cliché and gloriously appropriate this moment was before Freddy was on him, smearing his clothes with too-whipped butter and his mouth with sloppy kisses.

Jesus, yes. Oh, how Freddy makes my heart flutter.

This:

"You're like the devil in my head," Freddy reads. "Flying me to your castle in the sky."

And it is perfect, because Freddy will never stop surprising Zack.

made me smile, and, oh, so happy. Zach is too cute, and them becoming friends after the band is over with, is awesome. Please, write more Freddy/Zach!