Flipped [HopexVanille] MATURE fanfiction

[g_anakinffxiii]

This started as a prompt on the FFXIII Kink Meme on livejoural.  Check it out - keep it alive :D

Original prompt:

2010-03-31 09:41 pm

Needs moar closetslut!Vanille.

Vanille/Hope

Vanille seduces Hope and starts using him whenever she pleases until Hope is like 'You know what pigtails? I'm the one with the cock here.' and screws her silly. She loves it

Comments

[jongshin]

Oh wow, this pairing needs more love. I'm so glad you decided to pick up that prompt, cause it was really promising and the other fill it had was never finished D: But the way you write is ridiculously yummy and hot and I can't wait for the second part ;) Closetslut!Vanille needs to be a more common occurrence.

Oh, but I think your link for this ff13_fanfic might be formatted wrong? It didn't work for me, so I just clicked your username to find the fic.

[g_anakinffxiii]

Yes, this pairing could use more love! I'm actually the second person to do this prompt; although the first one originally wasn't finished, someone else came and finished it a couple of days ago.

Go read it if you're interested on someone else's take of the prompt!

Anyway, thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed.

Keep an eye out for Part 2! I also have two more fics coming up if you're interested.

Friend me :D

[g_anakinffxiii]

I don't know if you caught it, but I updated part 2 a couple of days ago :D

[jongshin]

Oh, here's where it was! I was looking for another post to contain the second part, haha. sorry I didn't get to this sooner. I don't check the e-mail I use for lj very often.

I'm not sure if I could ever imagine Hope being so demanding, but I won't deny that the smut was pretty good. Other than that, I suppose some of the dialogue could have been phrased better, but that's my only complaint. Nice work :)

[g_anakinffxiii]

Thanks for reading - yeah, I was uncomfortable with how the dialog turned out. You can't really blame me though; the prompt was very odd lol.

Glad you enjoyed the smut :D