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(H50) FIC: Defects and Merits

Nov 27, 2011 14:59

Title: Defects and Merits
Author: ga_unicorn
Spoilers: S1 Ma He Kahakai (Shore)
Characters: McGarrett and Danny, brief Chin Ho and Kono
Warning: none
Summary: This is a tag for Ma He Kahakai . Not following doctor’s orders for the care of a broken arm is not a good thing.

A/N: Many, many thanks to kristen999 for her beta’ing skills. All the bad bits are ( Read more... )

h50, mcgarrett, danno, fic

Comments 21

saphirablue November 27 2011, 21:17:48 UTC

*grins* This is a great coda!

You have the voices of the two of them down perfect!

I love Danny ranting at Steve and still being concerned about him.

Thank you! :)

ga_unicorn November 27 2011, 22:13:37 UTC

Love to hear when I get the characters right. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the lovely review.

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ga_unicorn November 27 2011, 22:15:03 UTC

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it.

embroiderama November 27 2011, 21:39:45 UTC

I love this--especially the moment when Steve gives in and accepts that he needs help.

ga_unicorn November 27 2011, 22:17:06 UTC

All the best heroes have a hard time reaching that point. And usually need to have it pointed out to them, again and again.

Very happy you enjoyed it. Thanks!

tridget November 27 2011, 22:27:13 UTC

Loved this. A perfect bit of h/c for a gray afternoon here. The characterization was spot on.

ga_unicorn November 28 2011, 03:16:32 UTC

Glad I was able to improve your afternoon. And thank you for taking the time to leave a comment; it's always good to know I've got the characters voices right.

sgflutegirl November 27 2011, 23:57:12 UTC

Love this so much!! :)

ga_unicorn November 28 2011, 03:19:20 UTC

Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it.