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[gabbiwithaneye]

15

This morning I woke
from a sleep so serene
to realize that I
am a girl of fifteen

I stare at the mirror
my hair amess
I recall the days
when I was a year less

My I was stupid
but I was pretty smart
waiting for my
real talent to start

So where am I now?
I'm placed just the same
Still at the very
start of the game

Sometimes I hate the world
sometimes it hates me

Comments

[teenynini]

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL. *tears*

I especially love the appropriation of word arrangement in this certain line:

"don't end up a schmuck"

such eloquence you have presented here :U

[gabbiwithaneye]

Thank the Yiddish for inventing such a degrading yet deliciously fun to say word!

[teenynini]

schmuck schmuck schmuck schmuck schmuck

egad, you're right!

[gabbiwithaneye]

Why, yes, yes I AM.
8D