Fic: Broken [2/?]

Jun 02, 2011 18:34

A/N: So I decided to give this another chapter after a really great review asking me to continue. So, again, I would love reviews on this, especially if you tell me if you want more, or what. I have a few ideas floating around in my head of ways to expand the story.

A/N 2: This story is the fault of youcallitwinter. lol I hate you cuz now I'm diving into the ( Read more... )

ratings: m, title: broken, character: damon salvatore, fanfic: the vampire diaries, pairing: damon/caroline, character: caroline forbes

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youcallitwinter June 3 2011, 11:20:38 UTC
"This story is the fault of youcallitwinter." You're welcome Damon/Caroline shippers, I'm pretty sure the fandom'll be happy that you decided to add more :D I really like the fact that Damon let Caroline take the upper hand; I think that more than anything else shows that he genuinely cares about her, because he hates seeming vulnerable, so if he is, it means he can trust her to not be like Katherine. And that he realizes that he did to her pretty much what others did to him (SHOW YOU NEED TO RESOLVE THEIR OUTSTANDING ISSUES, NOT IGNORE THEM ENTIRELY), and I like how when they're with each other, nothing else really seems to matter. Waiting for more now :D

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gabby227 June 3 2011, 16:33:21 UTC
This was meant to be a one-shot. I'm feeling a little lost because I wasn't sure how to expand it but now that I've got chapter 2 written I think I have an idea for the plot. I've got half of chapter 3 written so I should be posting it tonight or tomorrow. Thanks for reading!

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