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gabby_black

All thats left

Jun 22, 2007 22:47

Title: All thats left ( Read more... )

Comments 26

cateared_psycho June 22 2007, 15:59:42 UTC

*shivers* is this like, kill Reno month? that's why my story killed Rude instead! poor misused Reno...

this was very, very good. and touching. Rufus crying is always touching.

Haha gabby_black June 23 2007, 14:13:04 UTC

Is it kill Reno month, aww -hugs Reno- I love Reno, so it killed me to kill him, BUT after writing a Rufus/Reno fic i was asked to write a Cloud/Rufus, and i hjad alot of trouble trying to think of a way to bring two enemysa together. So yeah, thanks for the comment.

<3

jade_espio_22 June 22 2007, 17:16:45 UTC

oh snap i know you're going to write more on this right...i absolutely loved it especially the last line “You’re the Hero, save me”. I thought the way you made rufus break down was so great i would love to see what he looks like with tears in his eyes and especially in front of his enemy, that's probably the one thing he never wanted to do show weakness in front of Cloud. All in all i loved it. :)

Aww gabby_black June 23 2007, 14:16:18 UTC

Aww thanks, ya makin me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.

I actually wasn't planing on writing more, as I aint so good at the smut, lol. Though it would be an interesting smut to write.

I also would like to see Rufus break down, just to see him show emotion, though i'd probably cry myself then, lol. and hug him, which i'm sure he'd hate XD

Thanks for the comment ^^

<3

Re: Aww jade_espio_22 June 26 2007, 19:42:05 UTC

it doesn't have to be smut (although yes you're right that would be some hot action) i just think the story line would be great to read. I know i would probably break down if i saw Rufus cry to and then i would want to hung him and comfort him. hehe ;)

Re: Aww gabby_black June 27 2007, 07:27:17 UTC

It would be good if I could make the story bigger. like a flash back to what happened before the little meeting and then after...

Aww, no matter how many times people tell me Rufus is no good I cant help but feel theres a lot more to him.

<3

anime_monster June 26 2007, 21:39:46 UTC

This was so sad, but yay for Cloud/Rufus (there needs to be more of those types of fics).

Thanks ^^ gabby_black June 27 2007, 07:25:54 UTC

Your so right, after being asked to write this I went looking for some fics, see how they actually got the two together. All I got was Rufus being Cloud older brother (which is impossible, Rufus is younger) and rape. So yeah, I'd be good to see how others get two enemys together, cause I found it hard.

<3

Re: Thanks ^^ anime_monster June 29 2007, 06:14:00 UTC

Actually Rufus and Cloud are more likely to be twin brothers than older/younger, if Rufus is Cloud's older brother, it would only be because he's the older twin. The only time I've seen these two together, consensually, was a threesome fic with Reno.

Re: Thanks ^^ gabby_black June 29 2007, 09:44:13 UTC

I'm pretty sure Rufus is younger, its only by about a year or two though, though, they do have simualritys. Wow, now I know that wasn't spelt right XD

Hahahaha, well it is one of the only ways to get Rufus and Cloud that close to each other, as Cloud tolerates Reno as does Rufus (or in a yaoi point of veiw they tolerate him quite a bit ;) )
<3

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homgwtfbbq? ninionthemoon June 29 2007, 14:45:23 UTC

*resists urge to hate you*

You killed off my favorite red head (besides the Weasleys. Different fandom, doesn't count...). Guh, I hate death!fics but this was written very nicely bub! And you told me you sucked at it! Damn you, you do not suck. Oh, and now's the time to update your livejournal more often seeing I've left xanga and all. Eh, anyways. Back to the fic!

Very beautiful bub. And I just squee'd at all the man loving. And resisted the urge to kill you after I figured that Reno was dead (or in a coma... t'was a coma right? HOMG! Miracle, Reno wakes up and is alive and they all live happily ever after! okay, i'll shut up now).

Keep up the good work hon<3

Re: homgwtfbbq? gabby_black June 29 2007, 14:47:53 UTC

Haha, sorry bub, I hated doing it, Reno is my favorite!
But it was a request and I couldn't see any other way of Cloud and Rufus being in the same room without trying to kill each other.

And emotional Rufus is just so cute X3

Re: homgwtfbbq? ninionthemoon June 29 2007, 15:03:11 UTC

I'm sure I could think of a few ways *grins wickedly*. Oh, and you're listening to Dr. Bombay? I might have to kill you know (I listened to him in the third grade bub, please burn that rubbish).

Emotional Rufus is cute. But snerky, superior Rufus is hot. And Rival!Pr0n is even hotter. Ooo, yeah.

X3 (without the whee)

Re: homgwtfbbq? gabby_black June 29 2007, 15:05:18 UTC

Haha, I'm sure you could.
Shuddup, it reminds me of Demyx (Deymx? Demxy? I cant remember) cause its calls "My Sitar" its funny.

Haha, no kiddin ay. -stabs Jake- RUFUS IS AWSOME SHUDDUP!

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ninionthemoon July 2 2007, 18:38:19 UTC

bub, you need to update this thing. oh, and check out the new Emily Browning icons I made. Because I tell you to.

Buh? gabby_black July 3 2007, 01:56:10 UTC

Update the fic or my livejournal?

Re: Buh? ninionthemoon July 3 2007, 03:28:02 UTC

Your livejournal. And Dr. Bombay must die. No excuses. I don't care if he sings about a sitar or not. Just the thought of him being connected to my sweet darling Demyx in any way makes me wanna dig my eyes out with a tree spoon. For the love of yaoi and all the hot shounen-ai bishies out there, delete that song! Burn it! Aaaah! The horror!