further avengers commentfic

[gabby_silang]

awake in the dark, Loki and Thor...as...kids? Doing things? In Asgard? ~400 words, pg-13

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[amonitrate]

this is just so gorgeous, gabby.

[gabby_silang]

Aw, thank you.

[destro]

And Loki, small and sharp, singular, Loki knew. How could he not? Thor, though. Thor never did.

God. I love this. Loki, you are so, so homesick.

[gabby_silang]

Thor 2 = SPN S6??? :D?

[ladyelaine]

One of these days I'll wind up reading one of these things at night instead of first thing in the morning, and I WON'T SLEEP A WINK.

The eyeballs thing. I tell myself it's metaphorical, but I don't believe me.

And despite it all, it's... cute. In a holy hell eyeballs sort of way.

[gabby_silang]

Keeping someone's eyeballs in your pocket is just another way of saying I love you! Duuuuuh.

[ladyelaine]

Augh!!! No no no no no no!!!!!!!!!

[quigonejinn]

HOW AM I READING FIC ABOUT LOKI AND THOR AND ENJOYING IT THIS MUCH JESUS FUCK POSSIBLY BECAUSE YOU ARE A GODDAMN AMAZING WRITER. I JUST WANT TO WHISPER THIS TO MYSELF FOREVER.

They were babes for a century, children for five. It was summer and then summer and then summer. Flowers in the air, stars beneath their feet. Riding on the narrow backs of hunting hounds, carving their names in flagstones, and always the cold breath on his neck. Always the opaque premonition.

[gabby_silang]

HOW AM I WRITING THEM?? Idek. I think I'm done now. I think they're out of my system. Probably.

<3

[glorious_spoon]

Oh, Gabby, this is so lovely. So strange and lovely and...heavy, with the promise of things to come.

This is so beautiful, seriously.

[gabby_silang]

Thank you! I'm really glad you like it-- your opinion is quite dear to me.