[Writing] The Interrupter: Blending Action and Dialog Dynamically

[gabe_speaks]

She sidled up beside me and, with the boniest of her fingers, began to poke me in the chest as she spoke

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[pir8fancier]

I sooooooooooooo adore you.

::Off to rec::

[gabe_speaks]

awww, thanks!

and thanks for the rec, and the kind words you've said about me in a couple entries of yours. i appreciate the love!

[pir8fancier]

Only saying the truth...

[firefly124]

Here via pir8fancier's rec, and wow am I glad. Figuring out how to punctuate interrupters is something I've struggled with. I am definitely sticking this in memories for future reference!

[gabe_speaks]

awesome!

i'm glad to have been of help! the journal is generally friends-only (i think), but i'll make sure to keep any future writing-suggestion posts open for everyone. oh, and i'm open to suggestions for topics.

[jamie2109]

Very informative and I shall bookmark this and try to remember to use it. Thanks!

[gabe_speaks]

thanks!

[sassy_cissa]

It's official....I do love you. I'd offer to have your babies but....

Now just don't yell at me when I forget all of this. :P

[gabe_speaks]

~blushes~

you're forgiven! ;-)

finishing up your 2nd half now, by the way.

[sassy_cissa]

Cool, I'm about done with the first half. Should have it sent back to you tonight. *stops playing and gets busy*

[lijahlover]

Thanks so much! :)

[gabe_speaks]

you're very welcomed!