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gabi_fics July 16 2015, 11:29:59 UTC
Thank you. xxx
I couldn't describe Zeke's reaction to Casey exactly, but it worked well enough.
Thanks for sticking with me xxx

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aliensouldream July 16 2015, 00:10:54 UTC
*BRAIN IS MUSHIFIED FROM INTENSE HEAT ( ... )

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gabi_fics July 16 2015, 11:40:20 UTC
*rolls in your feedback* I am grinning right now. The boys fuck a lot, but it's been a few chapters since I described it in detail, and by that I mean it's been three fecking YEARS in writing time. O_o

Every time they fuck their souls connect, but Casey was actively looking for it this time so he recognised it for what it was.

And isn't he adorable on horseback?

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verangel July 16 2015, 16:42:50 UTC
I didn't realize this was up until today!!! WHAT ASD SAID IN EVERY WAY!!! this was magnificent I was loving all the details and Beckys joy (although the car chatter would be annoying to anyone after a bit). I could see the absolute love from his soul Zeke poured into Bella. It was an adorable exchange in Zeke realizing it a bit. I could feel Casey's want for him. The way you described what Casey wanted from this encounter had me reaching for it and feeling it from Zeke along with Casey. It was magnificent. I don't know what you worried about. You still have *it* and can make a person feel the erotic pleasure in every touch or kiss or deep reaching thrust of movement. It was beautiful. They both will be glowing like fireflies and pouring enough pheromones into the house when they walk in that all will be blushing like crazy except Becky although I could imagine her saying "you been riding?" And Casey saying yes with liquid blue eyes. Sighs. LOVED IT!!!! Hugs. Tons

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gabi_fics July 16 2015, 16:49:58 UTC
LOL I've already written the part in the next chapter where Lou notes that they're glowing.

The end result of the sex scene is fine, but nothing compared to the image in my head of Zeke's expression. Expressions are subtle though, they're hard to describe.

Glad you enjoyed this chapter xxx

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