Fic: It'll all be okay (1/1)

Mar 27, 2010 13:59

“Is it true? Are you back? For good?” Tony stood on Gibbs’ front porch, his shoulders squared and his fists clenched tightly at his sides. Gibbs had been in Mexico for four months and the team had finally gotten their feet back under themselves. Now Gibbs was walking back in as if he had been on vacation for a week.

Gibbs nodded. It was getting ( Read more... )

fic: 09/10

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citymusings March 27 2010, 22:00:06 UTC
That was incredible and amazing. This has to be one of the very best Post-Hiatus pieces I have ever read; I usually hate them, but I absolutely love this one. You have them all spot-on and the role you've put Tony in is just perfect. I think you've captured him well. Abby was just right also, the right mix of fear and love, forgiveness and worry. Gibbs' view was right on; I think he might have used her if he stayed, so maybe it is better for her like this. I'm glad he's explaining it all to her.

GREAT JOB!

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ncis_love March 28 2010, 04:51:40 UTC
Aww, thank you so much! Such a sweet comment. I'm glad you think I've captured them well, I was a little unsure..

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citymusings March 28 2010, 08:54:21 UTC
I think it's one of the best I've read from this ficathon. I adore Gabby, memoried this, and plan to make one of my fellow Gabby fans read this when she has time. :P

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ncis_love March 28 2010, 16:44:58 UTC
Thank you very much. It means a lot.

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driftingatdusk March 27 2010, 22:09:51 UTC
Ok, so you made me cry, but that's a good thing because this was so lovely though bittersweet in parts and your Tony/Gibbs friendship and Tony/Abby friendship is utterly, completely, perfectly as spot-on as your Abby/Gibbs friendship/romance and I envy that at the same time as I love it so.

And that's a really, really long sentence. *grin*

*hugs you lots* Thank you for writing this, both for the ficathon and because it's a fantastic piece.

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ncis_love March 28 2010, 05:06:47 UTC
Jo! You're so cute! *hands tissues*

I was a little concerned that Abby walked back into his arms a little too easily, but if you think it was spot-on, then I trust your judgment.

*squeeze*

Oh, and long sentence indeed - good thing I'm a fan of many commas. :D

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onlyonechoice March 27 2010, 23:23:10 UTC
This was so sweet and angsty - my two favorite aspects to fic that don't involve sex :D

*hugs* well done!

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ncis_love March 28 2010, 05:10:37 UTC
Aww, thank you so much! I'm glad you like it - encouraging coming from such an awesome writer like you!

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murgy31 March 27 2010, 23:52:12 UTC
Wow! That was incredible!!!! I loved it....

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ncis_love March 28 2010, 05:11:51 UTC
Thank you so much!

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nurse_stiney March 28 2010, 00:51:08 UTC
Oh, this was just PERFECT! All of their interactions and conversations just felt true to character, and the ending image of Abby clinging to Gibbs like a cute goth-y barnacle is adorable and SO them. :D Love this!!

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ncis_love March 28 2010, 05:13:57 UTC
"cute goth-y barnacle"

LOVE IT!!

Thank you :)

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