I haven't started the third parts yet but I am loving this story to bits. I love how sneaky Rodney tries to be and can't. He just loves John to pieces. And I think it is finally sinking in to John that Rodney loves him and he loves Rodney.
And the bit with Draco and Harry coming to the rescue. Possibly true love. What can I say I am a H/D fan also.
I'm really enjoying this. Your Rodney voice is hilarious, and I'm desperately in love with the image of George Weasley aiding and abetting his eavesdropping. Also, Rodney wanting to scan John during sex? Pure gold.
Couple of typos, both in the John and Harry scene in Gryffindor tower:
abdominal mark. should probably be "abominable;" I'm betting Word auto-corrected you? Unless you're actually talking about Harry's abdomen, in which case I have questions. :)
And when John sees the Dark Mark, he says he wants to burry his nine mil in Voldemort; should be "bury," one R.
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And the bit with Draco and Harry coming to the rescue. Possibly true love. What can I say I am a H/D fan also.
Well back to the third parts now.
Thanks
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Couple of typos, both in the John and Harry scene in Gryffindor tower:
abdominal mark. should probably be "abominable;" I'm betting Word auto-corrected you? Unless you're actually talking about Harry's abdomen, in which case I have questions. :)
And when John sees the Dark Mark, he says he wants to burry his nine mil in Voldemort; should be "bury," one R.
I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :D
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FTW. *laughs until tears come out*
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