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Feb 14, 2008 17:40

Title: Better Days, the sort of sequel
Pairings: Minchun and Jaeho
Rating: PG 13
Warnings: lame pick up lines and once again, weird nicknames
A/N: there aren't many Minchun scenes in the first 2 parts and i fear that this didn't turn out as good as i would have hoped -.-
Also, sorry if there's any errors. I didn't double check nor is it beta'ed. 
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yoomin, dbsk fic

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foolishlovexo February 15 2008, 01:32:44 UTC
Oh!

I'm off to read.

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foolishlovexo February 15 2008, 02:00:43 UTC
♥♥♥

LOL.

I don't think you butchered this. I think you did a great job!

I love the sarcasm and Yoochun's p.o.v it's funny!

AND When you describe Changmin as this smooth, cool type of guy, where Yoochun's a nervous, dorky boy, It's so so so much love! Seriously, I love how you portray them! It's different.

I loved reading this ^^

Thanks for sharing ♥

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gal12 February 15 2008, 02:51:25 UTC
thanks so much =hugs you and hands you tons of cookies, ice cream, and cake=
i am so happy that you loved it!!! =jumps around like a little girl=
thanks so much for commenting and reading!!!

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kurogoma February 15 2008, 02:50:04 UTC

one of the cutest yoomin fics i have read. ^^
yoochun is so crabby that it's lovable.

“If I could rearrange the alphabet, I would put U and I together.”

and those pick-up lines are so lame !! XDDDD
where did you get your inspiration?

those pictures were a nice touch too.

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gal12 February 15 2008, 02:55:34 UTC
chunnie is my pessimistic side XD
but i would be way much more annoying -.-

i got my inspiration from valentine's day? i guess since i don't really like v-day (esp. since i don't have a guy -.-) and i can only imagine the people who don't like but have to plan something for someone they care about?

the pick up lines were lame. i had so much more i wanted to put in, but it wouldn't fit XD

i'm not very descriptive, so, pics were the only option available to me =3

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moon1084 February 15 2008, 03:19:05 UTC
haha to cute and i really enjoyed the pics that went along with it. minnie looked so cute/sexy in that pic and the penthouse to die for and why cant they have cool coffee places like that where i live.

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gal12 February 15 2008, 03:25:29 UTC
i know! i'm so glad that i saved it =D
actually, i found the coffee shop pic from google... XD

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moon1084 February 15 2008, 03:48:05 UTC
very nice. i love authors like u that find pics and post it like this cuz it helps us see what u see

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gal12 February 15 2008, 03:49:08 UTC
aw, thank you! =hugs you=
but i mainly put it up since i can't describe things for my life XD

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chloe1910 February 15 2008, 04:18:38 UTC
bwhahaha I love this!! You should continue!! Keep it coming!!! Is it possible to link all the previous chapters together???? I would love to mem this...It'll save space for me if you linked them all instead of me having to go save them one by one....Serously, I love this!! This is absolutely fluffy and hilarious!! Pwetty pwease?

This is one of the fic that makes me really like Minchun...

PS: butchered this? My foot! You did great!!! bwhahahahahahaha roflmao... I so love Jae the-busybody-dorky-best-friend here!!

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gal12 February 15 2008, 19:57:42 UTC
i don't know about continuing it, i usually write it when there's an inspiration, in this case, v-day. so, i would run out of thigns to write about. sorry! but i'll write more when the occasion calls for it!

sure, i'll post all of it under one thing. i'll do it a little bit later, ok ^^
=hugs you= thanks! i always read yoomin so i wanted minchun!

thanks so much! and jae is the ultimate best annoying friend XD

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amouralamer February 15 2008, 07:06:43 UTC
Cool pics. Where is that park anyway? I would love to go there.

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gal12 February 15 2008, 19:52:23 UTC
i have no idea. i just looked for pics on google XD

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