Cottle was just so ACE in this chapter. I loved all his little jokes. Totally LOLd at - Jack glanced down, registering the dead fish in his hand, deadpan he replied, “I think it’s too late for this one. - but I really love that he's the Fifth. This is great.
And D'Anna, being one of my favourites, I absolutely adore her reaction and love that she keeps popping up.
This is just brilliant. You two are pure geniuses!!
Totally LOLd at - Jack glanced down, registering the dead fish in his hand, deadpan he replied, “I think it’s too late for this one That was a narciscia line of win! It made me LOL as well..and she nearly took it out, glad she didn't.
Awesome comment, happy you enjoyed it and like Cottle being the 5th! Thankyou so much. :-)
I was wondering why this chapter was so Cottle focused yet it still did not cross my mind that he's the final cylon! Great twist! I love that he's known all along and had no interest in playing along with D'Anna. Seeing her clueless and dejected was great!
I enjoyed the semi-quiet moments between Laura and Bill. I know the dreams are foreshadowing something but the calm in between is nice. As was the addition of cute little Joe. I find the idea of Bill playing with a child to be utterly adorable!
Such a nice and lovely story to come home to on a Sunday evening!
Well I didn't see that coming!!!! Now that i think of he is perfect!!! I love his attitude and the fact that he has known the whole time and before~~ This is to good I cant wait for next week!! I think I love Cottle even more then I did before~lol
Uhm... this? This was beyond amazing. I love your Cottle, and I love that you made him the fifth Cylon, and an aware one at that, and I loved how he really served it to D'Anna. Uhmm... Yeah. *hugs... is already looking forward to next week*
Still replying to last weeks comments....yes we are slow.
THANKYOU so much for your comment on chapter 6. We couldn't wait to reveal Cottle and judging by the reaction we had to it, we made the right choice with the 5th. :-)
Now that's a perfect reaction for Cottle to "finding out" he was the last cylon. *LOVED* it. His voice was great all the way through. Nice to see D'anna flustered as well (and that the fifth is actually someone who cares about A/R).
I love the little, normal moments between Bill and Laura. They rarely get these on the show, and it's wonderful to read.
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He nodded and walked away from her, his hands firmly in his pockets and his gaze directed at the floor. Laura noted that perhaps human and cylon relationships had taken a turn for the better. This man was obviously upset that he was indirectly responsible for the Leoben's fall. Gradually the wall between human and cylon was breaking down.
You have a lovely scene here that shows very clearly that human/cylon relations are slowly warming. It's enough that Laura notices the man's reaction -- you don't have to spell out what you've already shown really well in the scene :).
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And D'Anna, being one of my favourites, I absolutely adore her reaction and love that she keeps popping up.
This is just brilliant. You two are pure geniuses!!
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Awesome comment, happy you enjoyed it and like Cottle being the 5th! Thankyou so much. :-)
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I enjoyed the semi-quiet moments between Laura and Bill. I know the dreams are foreshadowing something but the calm in between is nice. As was the addition of cute little Joe. I find the idea of Bill playing with a child to be utterly adorable!
Such a nice and lovely story to come home to on a Sunday evening!
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Glad you like Cottle being the 5th and the way we played it with him already knowing that.
Bill with a child is TOTALLY adorable! lol
Thankyou for your comment hon. *hugs*
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I think I love Cottle even more then I did before~lol
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So glad you are still with us and enjoyed Cottle being the 5th. We couldn't wait to reveal him!!
Thankyou very much for commenting! :-)
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THANKYOU so much for your comment on chapter 6. We couldn't wait to reveal Cottle and judging by the reaction we had to it, we made the right choice with the 5th. :-)
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I love the little, normal moments between Bill and Laura. They rarely get these on the show, and it's wonderful to read.
Just a little note:
He nodded and walked away from her, his hands firmly in his pockets and his gaze directed at the floor. Laura noted that perhaps human and cylon relationships had taken a turn for the better. This man was obviously upset that he was indirectly responsible for the Leoben's fall. Gradually the wall between human and cylon was breaking down.
You have a lovely scene here that shows very clearly that human/cylon relations are slowly warming. It's enough that Laura notices the man's reaction -- you don't have to spell out what you've already shown really well in the scene :).
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So glad you liked the way we revealed Cottle as the 5th and D'Anna's reaction to it. We couldn't wait to post this chapter.
Thankyou for your comment. :-)
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