Another fantastic chapter! I am really enjoying this story - you're doing a great job of weaving a complex plot together and keeping the tension up each time. I'm so curious to find out what exactly is going on, but I'm really enjoying the ride too!
I love the scenes between Saul and Cottle and babies are named Jack and William! Adorable. Bill and Laura going camping just makes me happy. And the scene between Laura and Kara was just really gripping good stuff. They have such a complicated (and more than a little frakked up) relationship and I I liked how you delved into it here. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Camping! I just loved Bill's struggle with the tent. So cute. :) (And were they sure there was no press camping on the nearby clearing? :)) As for Kara's and Laura's relationship...I'm still not sure I completely forgave Kara for her behavior in Epiphanies (deleted scene). So Laura really is trying her best, I think. And the prophecy/statues storyline just gets more complicated with every chapter...And more interesting of course...And why do I have the feeling twins are going to play their roles yet?
Brilliant. You guys rock! Love that the twins are called Jack and William, hee, too cute & the scene between Laura and Kara just blew me away, such a heartfelt scene. I hope we get some sort of resolution between these two on screen come January but if not, I'll just promote this one to canon in my head, along with Bill and Laura going camping together, it's genius!
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You guys need to just take over the world already. Mmkay?
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You guys need to just take over the world already. Mmkay?
I don't think the world would cope! LOL
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I think maybe the world would just have to suck it up and deal with the awesome.
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LOL!
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I love the scenes between Saul and Cottle and babies are named Jack and William! Adorable. Bill and Laura going camping just makes me happy. And the scene between Laura and Kara was just really gripping good stuff. They have such a complicated (and more than a little frakked up) relationship and I I liked how you delved into it here. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Thankyou again for your lovely comment!
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As for Kara's and Laura's relationship...I'm still not sure I completely forgave Kara for her behavior in Epiphanies (deleted scene). So Laura really is trying her best, I think.
And the prophecy/statues storyline just gets more complicated with every chapter...And more interesting of course...And why do I have the feeling twins are going to play their roles yet?
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I was shocked when I saw those deleted scenes, I am not surprised they cut them. Puts a whole new spin on the Laura/Kara relationship.
Glad you are enjoying still and hope you will continue to do so. Thankyou for commenting! :-)
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“Nah, don’t like the name ‘Doc.’”..just lmao!!
and scene with tent and Bill..priceless.
hey finally got the tent erect and the fire going WILLNOTHAVESMUTTYTHOUGHTS...FAILED.
Best chapter this far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Cottle is always made of win. I love that character.
You know Bill would need help with the pole..lmao
If you managed to read that sentence without getting smutty thoughts I am taking you back to the shop and demanding a refund! lol
YAY ANOTHER BEST CHAPTER!!!!
*hugs*
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