CHAPTER XI

Nov 30, 2008 14:04


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karuri November 30 2008, 18:55:32 UTC
JAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACKKK

I love the line about "that temper tantrum" and "I lost count" I ADORE your Cottle and hope he really is the 5th. Baltar = dying leader. ICANNOTTELLYOUHOWMUCHILOVEYOUPPLZ

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franglaisy November 30 2008, 19:40:04 UTC
WE LOVE YOU TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Thankyou so much for your comment!

Glad you are still with us! Hope you continue to enjoy it!

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babylon_whore November 30 2008, 19:17:38 UTC
DAMN YOU BOTH!!! IS IT NEXT SUNDAY YET???!!

You are continuing to blow my motherfrakking mind. Which is something I actually appreciate, cos good storytelling should do just that.

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franglaisy November 30 2008, 19:42:42 UTC
6 DAYS AND SO MANY HOURS UNTIL NEXT SUNDAY! LOL

Your comment blew my motherfrakking mind dude! Thankyou so much!!!
I got an extremely huge smile on my face right now!

Seriously, glad you are enjoying it still, and ya comment means a lot to both of us.

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obsessive_a101 November 30 2008, 19:26:12 UTC
THANK THE GODS!!!

Whew, glad I got that out of my system. Now, can I tell you guys that you are brilliant? ABSOLUTELY brilliant?

The interactions and relationships you've created between all these characters, the nuances, the movement and flow of actions and thoughts and realizations are so pitch-perfect that reading this is wondefully natural. Nothing seems forced or out there, and your coloring in of Cottle, of his reveals and conversations and his own thoughts are so beautifully crafted that I sit here and wonder how this can possibly NOT be how it works out in season 4.5 at times. And Laura's NOT THE DYING LEADER! And Bill has come to the same understanding as Laura that this just means (on the bright side) that he will always be with her. Hee. (^_^) And that scene with Baltar? And all the head!people, especially scary head!Laura, was hilariously good.

Just, I LOVE THIS, and it's scary how much I look forward to this each week.

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alexis_davis02 November 30 2008, 19:44:12 UTC
I hadn't had a chance to comment on the last few chapter, but I had to take the time and saw what a wonderfully rich and interesting fic this has become. Seriosuly, you are coming up with stuff that I can only hope RDM thought of.

And I think its such a beautiful idea that Bill and Laura have know and loved each other for lifetimes -- and lots of CottleLove!

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spikesbuffy November 30 2008, 19:59:46 UTC
Amazing chapter!

Love Cottle's interactions with both Bill and Laura. Classic Cottle.

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