I can't say enough how much good well thought out, well plotted and well written fic is frakking OWED comments. The least a reader can do after reading stuff as good as this is throw a couple of lines of comment at it.
I actually pity Baltar a bit here, and him kissing Laura, and both hers and Cottle's reactions afterwards are just so very good and funny, and yet, also touching in its own little way. (Note - Is there anyone who doesn't love Laura? I'm pretty sure I'm in love with her. XD)
I continue to adore the way the interactions between the different characters are being written. I love how you've developed a double theme here: the smaller, more personal relations between individuals and the larger, more encompassing relations between the different "races."
Also? The memories are so very intriguing, and I like the way they've been worked in here.
I just love your story and I am glad to see you both back. I have been so happy to see another chapter is up.:-)
I loved the Cottle/Laura/Baltar part. The kiss-scene :p Would have loved a scene like this on my tv-screen and in the show there is definately not enough Cottle.
All in all it have been an very good chapter again.
Hope you both are doing better again and still wish you a Happy New Year.:-)
*Seriously we sit there and the words appear (by magic) on screen*
this is called talent.:-) Wished I could do that...tried it at many times in the past, but it was never my thing to write storys..so I am only a passionate reader now. And I really love the way you both write this story:-)
thank you so much for the icon-comment, I would love to say all credits goes to angiescully for her awesome work. Your icon isn´t that bad either, Cigarrete & Airlock. Looks awesome,too.:-) I should try it to do some icons too.:-)
I hope so much we get to see Cottle a bit more in season 4.5.:)
Wow, the beginning was superhot; what a way to wake up!
Also loved theBill/Saul and Laura/Cottle scenes, especially Cottle's little slip and crazy Gaius showing up. But wow, Baltar getting shot!!! Can't wait to see what happens next :D
WooHoo!!! It's back!! I loved the hot and fun opening, and it is amazing that you have made me feel kinda sorry for Gaius. I'm really looking forward to understanding how all these flashbacks fit together. As always, great stuff!
She tutted in exasperation and cracked open one eye. “If it’s before eight Bill I will kill you.”
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I can't say enough how much good well thought out, well plotted and well written fic is frakking OWED comments. The least a reader can do after reading stuff as good as this is throw a couple of lines of comment at it.
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I can't thankYOU enough for such wonderful comments. It has made my day...and then some.
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I actually pity Baltar a bit here, and him kissing Laura, and both hers and Cottle's reactions afterwards are just so very good and funny, and yet, also touching in its own little way. (Note - Is there anyone who doesn't love Laura? I'm pretty sure I'm in love with her. XD)
I continue to adore the way the interactions between the different characters are being written. I love how you've developed a double theme here: the smaller, more personal relations between individuals and the larger, more encompassing relations between the different "races."
Also? The memories are so very intriguing, and I like the way they've been worked in here.
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(Note - Is there anyone who doesn't love Laura? I'm pretty sure I'm in love with her. XD)
Nope I can't think of anyone who isn't...only not as epically in love with her as Bill Adama! LOL
We had a great time writing this chapter..the memories were great fun to write as we could let our imaginations run wild.
Thankyou so much for your comment, I hope you continue to enjoy right up to the end.
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And I'm just so happy you and narciscia are writing this wonderful fic that I really should be the one to say thank you. (^_^)
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NO REALLY THANKYOU!
FRAN
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I have been so happy to see another chapter is up.:-)
I loved the Cottle/Laura/Baltar part. The kiss-scene :p
Would have loved a scene like this on my tv-screen and in the show there is definately not enough Cottle.
All in all it have been an very good chapter again.
Hope you both are doing better again and still wish you a Happy New Year.:-)
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this is called talent.:-)
Wished I could do that...tried it at many times in the past, but it was never my thing to write storys..so I am only a passionate reader now. And I really love the way you both write this story:-)
thank you so much for the icon-comment, I would love to say all credits goes to angiescully for her awesome work.
Your icon isn´t that bad either, Cigarrete & Airlock. Looks awesome,too.:-) I should try it to do some icons too.:-)
I hope so much we get to see Cottle a bit more in season 4.5.:)
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Wow, the beginning was superhot; what a way to wake up!
Also loved theBill/Saul and Laura/Cottle scenes, especially Cottle's little slip and crazy Gaius showing up.
But wow, Baltar getting shot!!! Can't wait to see what happens next :D
Good to have you two back :)
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It is good to be back! Glad you liked Bill's way of waking Laura up ;-)
Cottle would love to kiss her..well myself and Narc think so. LOL!
Thankyou for the comment! x
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She tutted in exasperation and cracked open one eye. “If it’s before eight Bill I will kill you.”
*giggle* I love her and them so! =)
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We made you feel sorry for Gaius? LOL! Poor Gaius..things are only going to get worse for the poor frakweasel.
I think she would totally moan at him about waking her up, until of course she realised why. hehehe.
Thankyou for your lovely comment. :-)
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