This is a really lovely piece. It's really intersting to see Artemis' pov. Althou i have to say, I fet the last part was a little rushed. Maybe it would be more effective if it was extended a little? Other than that, it's really something. You could just feel the paternal instincts he has for Mina, and even all the girls, since he thought about what happened to Makoto first. That was a nice touch. Loved it!
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