Ficathon

[galaxylily]

Whelp. Here it is, my ficathon entry for 2k9. This piece sorta came at me like a bullet train running late to get to the next stop. I wrote it at breakneck speed for me and I actually really enjoyed writing it. When I thought of the songs I was going to use for this year I was pretty sure I was going to end up with either X-Japan, Third Eye Blind

Comments

[satine86]

Okay, so I followed your link on shitennou ai and thought I would comment here. This is my absolutely favorite song and one my favorite SM couples so you can't really go wrong IMHO!

But goodness rip my heart out why don't ya!

"Darkened shop windows and doorways loomed on either side of him and the pale splashes of light from the street lamps created shadows on the edges that threatened to devour what remained of his soul."

That line just stood out to me, so descriptive and bleak... and I wanna hug Jensen! :(
This story is beautifully written, and you can feel the emotions flowing off the screen.

[galaxylily]

Thanks so much for the comment. Glad you enjoyed it!

[lovelylytton]

I think I already commented on this during the ficathon itself, but let me do so again: it is fantastic, especially with Jensen baring his heart and then with Rei rejecting him so cruelly despite KNOWING that his feelings for her are nothing but sincere. Silly girl doesn't know what's good for her.

[galaxylily]

Haha, thanks! I dunno why this particular version of Rei/Jade came out so overly dramatic and depressing, but they did! Rei's not usually so cold for me, but I kinda like her this way. So glad you like it!