Learn from my ficathon fail:

[galaxylily]

Actual first discarded line from my "fairytale:"

"A thousand years ago, our moon was home to a great civilization; then everything changed when the Dark Kingdom attacked."

WHYYYYYYYYY?! hahaha.

Comments

[covenmouse]

Isn't that from the dub? XDDD <3

[galaxylily]

Caught me! I had to laugh at myself and go, "why did I just write that?"

Oh well. Back to the drawing board.

[lovelylytton]

At least you are already editing. I have not written one word. Oh, woe is me.

But hey, why is this fail? *does not get it* *is confused*

[galaxylily]

Well, that's all I had written.

It's "fail" because it's the opening line of the English dub mushed together with the opening line of Avatar: The Last Airbender (essentially).

[ellorgast]

Now I'm gonna have that narrator's voice stuck in my head for the day. "...Everything was peaceful, until the arrival of the evil Queen Beryl!"

[venusorbit1]

I'm pretty sure my first draft contained the word "penis" so you're way ahead of me in every respect.