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Oliver: Chapter 7: "Shopping"

Nov 21, 2013 06:01

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later2nite November 21 2013, 16:29:30 UTC

Out of control shopper Brian --- I love it! Another great chapter, Rory.

"Can you say Wal-Mart?" Funniest line ever. Brian's gonna lose it if Justin buys their son ANYTHING at Walmart! LOL

Hugs,
Linda

galeandrandy December 22 2013, 09:21:44 UTC

:) I always love shopaholic!Brian in stories, I men come on, who buys a LCD TV when they lose their job if not a shopaholic, right?

Oh, Justin is so teaching Oliver 'wal-mart' that line will come later, *grins evilly*

shadownyc November 21 2013, 19:54:22 UTC

These two chapters are adorable!

galeandrandy December 22 2013, 09:22:07 UTC

Thank you so much, happy you're enjoying them.

sandraj60 November 21 2013, 21:57:02 UTC

"Once upon a time, there was a man who had an addiction to shopping."

This was a hoot! I love your take on Brian addictive personality. I enjoyed the entire chapter and then I saw the picture of Oliver. That is too much. You somehow found a kid that looks like the both of them. Those cheeks are Justin's but that spikey hair is all Brian. Just adorable!

galeandrandy December 22 2013, 09:22:46 UTC

Thanks, Sandra. I really wanted to address his ridiculousness but also make it in a 'serious' way. I hope I did a good job.

Oh yeah, you area so right about where he gets each look.

:)

shenova November 22 2013, 21:38:02 UTC

Brian does love to shop and it's wonderful see him kitting out his son. Justin is very plain in his tastes and doesn't see the point in to much designer gear but a little is fine. Cool gym. Nice couple of updates. Oliver is to cute.

galeandrandy December 22 2013, 09:23:09 UTC

Thank you so much for reading, happy you like everything.
:) Rory