Comments | galmaegi: [infinite] entrust

galmaegi

[infinite] entrust

Dec 26, 2013 18:11

entrust
infinite, sungyeol/sungjong
pg-13 (pseudo-incest, discussion of homophobia/outing), 10,094w
sungyeol doesn’t want to get closer to his new stepbrother, until he finds out they have more in common than just family.
--written for irethsingollo for infinitesanta 2013.
--infinite, "entrust"
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( Since we’re going to be living together soon, my father (our father?) thought it would be good if I got in touch with you to say hi. Hi~ ^^ )

* sungyeol, * sungjong, # infinite

Comments 2

nicetwomeetyou September 9 2014, 12:38:43 UTC

This is honestly AMAZING! The way you wrote it and how the story flowed so well! I got anxious as Sungyeol did when he was waiting for Sungjong's email reply or on his bus ride to Gwangju, not knowing what to expect! I honestly had a good laugh a couple of times (especially when he first met Sungjong and was trying very hardnot to think of his have a hard on) and I really enjoyed this light-hearted fiction very much. The characters were portrayed in a way that is really believable, I think this would be exactly how Sungjong, Woohyun or Sungyeol would act given the situation :D You mentioned Myungsoo being cut... I wonder what his character would contribute to the story if you hadn't XD Sorry if my comment is all over the place, just wanna say this is one of the best YeolJong fics I've read to date!

p.s. pseudo-incest is hot as hell lol

galmaegi October 9 2014, 03:17:42 UTC

wow, thank you so much for this comment (and sorry for this rudely late reply)! i think it could be more ~pseudo incesty~ haha but i'm glad you liked it.