[valentines] home run

Feb 08, 2014 00:00

home run
bts, j-hope/v
pg-13, 1671w
taehyung likes to be in charge. hoseok decides he likes it, too.
--for herocountry
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“My boyfriend hit me with a stick and I kind of liked it” isn’t a very productive Naver search. )

* j-hope, * v, # bts

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herocountry February 8 2014, 08:42:57 UTC
I'M SO HAPPY omg i was like "should i read this now or should i sleep" but then... my eyes started on the first sentence of their own accord u___u THIS WAS SO CUTE (i forgot 2 say no need to write porn in my prompt dw /___\) i'm so charmed, esp by your choice of an established relationship, like normally i don't have particular feelings abt that either way but for some reason i was so glad they were already dating here, it was probably all the descriptions of lap sitting, holding hands and pinkies, THE TOTALLY REALISTIC LIMITS TO THEIR SEX (unf practicality me harder), omgg my heart is SO WARM. i rly like how you took my prompt and incorporated their stage bat with it bc i didn't think of that at all AND IT'S SO PERF wow daydreams of everything he could've gotten up to w/ it T_T this setup is so great i love v smacking ppl with things but also just fooling around with the stick later, and all this curious wondering/searching tension ughh GALMAEG2 T_T_T also wow sry this is so overexcited, gently edits to be more succinct

kissing ( ... )

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galmaegi February 16 2014, 17:15:22 UTC
i'm so pleased! canon fic is such a minefield to navigate (plus relationships in canon fic = ?!?!) and i'm v honoured that you liked it u___u thank you for the prompt, i had a very fun time writing vhope and v!

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shrdmdnssftw February 8 2014, 16:07:09 UTC
ahhhhh, this was so good! I really enjoy reading kink negotiation in fics, but I also like the development of relationships and this just gave me both in one go, and was so lovely!

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galmaegi February 16 2014, 17:15:44 UTC
thank you very much!

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staygame February 8 2014, 18:01:35 UTC
o..mg...can i just second the first comment...........anyway your perfect v a little weird a little weirdly intense. the vhope dynamic is everything i wanted out of them- sweet and exploring- and the negotiation felt very much in character.

gj ♥

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galmaegi February 16 2014, 17:16:44 UTC
aaah i'm so glad to hear this worked for you :') hurray for vhope! thank you for reading!

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seulpeo February 9 2014, 01:31:21 UTC
whisperscreams ive always read kinkfic but not kink negotiation fic and i like this a lot more than i expected huhuhu but i knew i was going to like it a lot from the beginning/cut text HAHA bless. waiting for the actual porn maybe!?!?!?

Kim Seokjin’s voice cracked, Park Jimin finally memorized the words, Jeon Jungkook and Park Jimin had a long note contest and Jeon Jungkook coughed halfway through and lost,” he intones. He tosses his head. “Kim Taehyung performed perfectly, of course.”
your taehyung is my hero

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galmaegi February 16 2014, 17:17:23 UTC
ahahaha we'll see if the actual porn gets written >__> i guess i need to put that title to good use? anyway thanks for reading! v is a lot of fun to write n__n

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sugakookies February 9 2014, 12:13:06 UTC
melts a little bit
flails a little bit
melts some more

the way you write v is adorable omg \n_n/

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galmaegi February 16 2014, 17:17:55 UTC
thank you for reading! i had a lot of fun getting into his character, hehe.

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