fic: The Dark of the Matinee

[gameboycolor]

Title: The Dark of the Matinee
Author: gameboycolor
Pairing: Klaine
Spoilers: none
Warnings: pre-D/S elements, exhibition
Rating: R
Length: ~800
Summary: Kurt may have picked the film, but that doesn't mean that he isn't bored.

Comments

[frumiousme]

weeeow hot!

[gameboycolor]

Thanks!

[cia_88]

I loved it, but I didn't really get your "pre-D/S elements" warning (I don't want to sound rude, sorry, I just don't see it)

[gameboycolor]

It was more of a subtle feel I was going for, and I appreciate you commenting and reading anyway. :)

[likeasouffle]

I got it from this section:

Kurt knows it’s a sign of how out of his element Blaine is.
They both are.
But if Blaine was truly uncomfortable, he would say something.
And Kurt would listen.
Kurt vaguely wonders if they shouldn’t have a signal for these sort of things.
“Honey,” Kurt says quietly. “You’re doing, ah, so well.”

It's like Kurt doesn't know anything about D/s or safewords, but he's having to invent the concept of safewords himself because they need one. :)

[gameboycolor]

Thank you :)

[kacibowen]

You're kinda perfect.

[gameboycolor]

<3333

[chartreuse_77]

1. I read the title as "The Dark of the Manatee" at first. This happens to me every time someone write the word matinee.

2. I love that you were able to make them smoldering hot, but still perfectly in character. How do you do that? What sorts of voodoo magic must you conjure?

[gameboycolor]

1. YOU ARE NOT ALONE. Four people on tumblr said the same.

2. I try to keep them at least somewhat fumbling - they're still teenagers after all. It helps!

[rockinhamburger]

HOT. Intriguing!

[gameboycolor]

Thanks :D