Comments | gammraymemory: Chapter 7: PART II" The New Dawn of Blood and Hate

gammraymemory

Chapter 7: PART II" The New Dawn of Blood and Hate

Jun 02, 2005 23:48

The man cranked another round into his shotgun, aiming at me with a look of hatred in his green eyes. I roll dodgeing into the cold back room, as he fires only catching wood. I see the in the refection of the walls of a man lying down and a woman with a revolver in one and a bloody blade at the other, gripping it with all might.Alyx ans Eric. ( Read more... )

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angelbaby1117 June 3 2005, 06:36:13 UTC

WOW.great chapter its my favorite so far.it has so much detail i can see it all happening.i feel the tension and hatred in me against that man as i read the story lol i feel like im there.well anyways great job and keep writing.-*JaCkY*-

Thank you gammraymemory June 3 2005, 06:43:00 UTC

Thx i think ima gonna edit it, the next chapter ther gonan run into a gang. it will be good.

cobainoncocaine June 7 2005, 10:08:17 UTC

Damnit Luke.........I think I have ADD. I don't have patience to read your damn stories.

wow darknessgurl June 11 2005, 02:28:19 UTC

Hey Lukey. It's Evana.
Nice story so far. Keep the story and keep writing.

Re: wow gammraymemory June 11 2005, 20:36:45 UTC

Hey whats up, yes i know my story is soo awesome and by awesome i mean it sucks balls haha no but hows it going
-luke

Re: wow darknessgurl June 14 2005, 03:21:25 UTC

Read my LiveJournal and see half of whats fucking me over.