Dark Streets- Chapter 1: A Long Feeling
If I had known that would be the last time I saw her, I would have said I loved her. I would have tucked her in more tightly, and wished her wonderful dreams. If I would have known that this whole world was going to turn to shit in the blink of an eye on that mournful summer night, I would have been more careful what I did and said to the ones I ( Read more... )
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Chapter 1 is only 4 pages long so read it damn nigga's
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How cool
Very good writing.
Descriptive and powerful with a hint of sensitivity( in the character's demeanor).
adri
Keep up the good work!
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