Half of chapter 2 check it the other half is on the other comp and im not getting up

[gammraymemory]

            The grenade landed softly atop the door-ramp. I  feel my body lose pressure and my grip give on my shot gun, drawing tight on the sling as gravity took its toll, as the grenade rolled down next to my boots. I accepted this as my cruel gruesome fate, and I closed my eyes out in the dark.

He grabbed me pulling me straight off

Comments

[cobainoncocaine]

Wow, who gives a fuck about your gay stories?

Lmao.......j/k Luke, it's interesting......but yet some errors in the grammar section.

[gammraymemory]

yeah like at the end i didnt even like
proofread it i jsut like.....drank some tecate you know basic stuff