[Fic] Forbidden Love - Ch12

[garnet_light]

Chapter12: Forever With You

Silence…..blindness…..everything seemed so far away….the voices of people….the cars…..it was almost like time stopped at that moment for him…..he still couldn’t process what happened….he couldn’t understand…..he kept saying in his mind……that all of this…..is not real….this can’t be happening….this is not the way

Comments

[bbabyhiirah]

Poor Kame... Why must he be crazy... *sigh*
what can I say that's call fated destiny...
And it's really hard to accept someones death so easily...
Anyway in a mental world at least he is happy!! :)
thanks for the update!!!

[garnet_light]

Yes, he's at least happy in his own world now.
It's very hard to accept the death of someone close to you especially seeing him die in front of you.
I hope you enjoyed it!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear~~

hiiiiiiiiiiii

[asama_san99]

i love it soooooooooooooo much plzzzzzzz can u do part two like they find jin look alike and they use him to help kazuya

Re: hiiiiiiiiiiii

[garnet_light]

I'm glad you loved it dear!! ^__^
But sorry, I don't think there will be any continuation for this one~~
I think this ending is perfect for the story!
Thanks for reading and commenting!!

[sari_pikapika]

NOO!! WHY!! NANDE!!
so sad about jin...now kazu's mentally unstabled...jin should take him away with him so they can be together in another life~
their parents...i understand their thoughts and whatever...but it is their fault why kazu and jin ended up running away in the first place and why they hurt so much too~

thanks for sharing...at least in the end, jin stayed with him...even if the doctor thinks kazu is crazy and he probably is but seeing jin and being with him gives him ease. XD

[garnet_light]

Yeah, it's very sad.
But at least, Kazu still thinks he's with Jin ne~~
The parents were at fault no matter how they felt. They did so many wrong things till the point that Kazuya doesn't trust them anymore.
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear~~

[amyray1111]

wow... i can't remember if i've commented before on this, but this ending was not what I expected (in a good way). I thought it was going to be happy and predictable but it ended up feeling very real and disturbing... Seriously good job. i can't really describe my feelings in words, but it was great.

[garnet_light]

Yaaaay! I'm so happy that you loved it sweetie and glad that it left you speechless xD
I know what you mean! I could make it all happy and colorful, but that isn't the suitable ending for this one.
Thanks a lot for your kind words, reading and commenting!! *hugs*

[aishayue]

ahhhh....ahhhh...what the...huh?

i am shocked... but i love this angst. bitter-sweet angst.
it really happens in true life.

ending it this way is very much realistic. thank you dear. it has been a good read. really. congrats for finishing it. you ended it in gran style.

[garnet_light]

I'm so happy you loved it dear~~
I wasn't sure you liked it from your first line, lol!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie~~
I'm glad you think so! It makes me so happy that you loved the ending! *hugs*