[Fic] Forbidden Love - Ch12

Aug 15, 2010 04:34

Chapter12: Forever With You

Silence…..blindness…..everything seemed so far away….the voices of people….the cars…..it was almost like time stopped at that moment for him…..he still couldn’t process what happened….he couldn’t understand…..he kept saying in his mind……that all of this…..is not real….this can’t be happening….this is not the way ( Read more... )

fanfic: multi-chapter, fanfic: forbidden love

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keeaneegan August 15 2010, 03:01:07 UTC
oh my... kazuya is losing his mind... but he's happy at least with his own mind....
i like it ^_^

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garnet_light August 15 2010, 22:21:33 UTC
Yes he is >.<
But as you said, he's at least happy in his own world ne~~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!
I'm so happy you liked it!! ^__^

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darkangel265 August 15 2010, 03:02:01 UTC
*sighs* Love is hard.
Poor Kazu loosing someone important. But he will always have Jin beside him.
*claps* It was an interesting chap, i kinda guessed that Kazu was going to go delusiona, but its better than him killing himself to follow Jin.
Love it!

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garnet_light August 15 2010, 22:23:47 UTC
Yes, love is definitely hard.
And it's a huge shock or even more when a person you think is your soulmate dies ne~~
I'm so happy that you think so!! *hugs*
Well, this end came to my mind immediately when I thought of this fic story. I think it's the best ending for this, so I'm glad you loved it!!

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! <3

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yamasho August 15 2010, 04:12:37 UTC
you kill jin finally
uwaa it was so sad
it already too late for their family
if only they realize it sooner it wont be happen right

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garnet_light August 15 2010, 22:25:24 UTC
Yeah it is sad T_T
I didn't mean to kill Jin, but that's how the story is >.<
Yes, it's already too late for the family to make everything right ne~~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! ^^

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dorayaki_chan August 15 2010, 04:25:54 UTC
why would anyone kill u? they won,t be able to read your entertaining and yet sadistic fic in the future, and that,s such a shame X) tell me crazy but I consider this as a happy endinf story, coz in the end they still together and happily love each other, now I am as delusional as kazuya , ha ha ha :)

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garnet_light August 15 2010, 22:27:34 UTC
Hahahahahahahahahaha
Well, that's true. How else would I be able to update my other fics ne, lol!
I'm so happy you liked the ending!
Yes, this is a happy ending for me too. It fits the story and Kazu is happy with imaginary Jin ne~~
Yeah, that definitely part of seeing it!! heheheh~~

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie! *hugs*

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wneliana August 15 2010, 04:37:41 UTC
i'm gonna miss this fic...'huhu..
sad ending but that's what we probably have to face in the real world..nothing is as perfect as to be happy forever..
poor kazu..he got that..i wish i don't have to face this kazu in this real world..it must be too hard and too sad to look at this kazu..i'm sad for him..it's gonna to be too much for him to keep on living if he knew the truth when he is ok..well, just let him be like this..imagining that jin is always there for him..

well, u did a nice job for this fic..i'm looking forward for ur next fic..and..i hope i may read the updates for the wrong move and kame goes wild coz i really miss those fics of yours..huhu..

*hugs and kisses for u...chuuuuu~~~~*

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garnet_light August 15 2010, 23:38:52 UTC
Yeah, I'm going to miss it too!
You're totally right! We're in the real world where happy endings doesn't exist or they do, but not in everybody's point of you.

I'm glad you think so! ^__^
I tried to write all the emotions they had and hope that I conveyed them well!
I will definitely focus on the other fics now and update them soon ^^

*hugs u tightly*
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear~~
Chuuuuuuuuuuuuu~~

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wneliana August 16 2010, 14:22:50 UTC
welll..different POV comes from different person..
but i'm trying to be realistic..
hehehe..
but as u say, not everybody has the same POV as me...

u really convey them well!!!very, very well!!!
u make me cry..u make me smile..and u make me giggle along the way i'm reading this fic..
and i maybe read this again later!!! xD..

and i'm waiting for ur updates ne!!!
i love the way u write ur fics..
full of emotions..
keep on writing babe!!!
u have me as ur fan..
hehehe..

*hugs u back!!!chuuuuu~~~~*

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garnet_light August 17 2010, 13:16:27 UTC
You don't know how much this comment touched me! *hugs*
I'm so glad that I conveyed those feelings well..
and I'm so happy that you're my fan!! *jumps in circles*
I will do my best to update my other fics and maybe start with a new one as well!
Can't wait to read your comment in them as well!!
Chuuuuuuuuuu~~

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