[Fic] Forbidden Love - Ch12

[garnet_light]

Chapter12: Forever With You

Silence…..blindness…..everything seemed so far away….the voices of people….the cars…..it was almost like time stopped at that moment for him…..he still couldn’t process what happened….he couldn’t understand…..he kept saying in his mind……that all of this…..is not real….this can’t be happening….this is not the way

Comments

[yuuki_saya]

Poor Kazu... No wonder it ended like that... So much pain in his life... Maybe delusional is better for him that truth?
Sad fic, really sad...

[garnet_light]

Yeah, you're right!
He's been through a lot, but I guess he's better this way ne~~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!
It sure is sad >_

[hinodesol]

I think... that end is somehow nice. (That might sound crazy but..) I mean, at least Kazuya is happy, even though he's delusional. It... made me smile a bit, even though I was so sad that Jin died. I was so sure Kazuya would do a suicide >___< But I'm glad he didn't, he's happy now.

Yeah, it was nice. Thank you for writing this fic. I hope you'll start a new one soon. ^^

[garnet_light]

It is nice in my view ne~~
I'm not sure is it because I'm one who wrote it, but I think the ending isn't so bad. Kazuya is at least happy where he is right now ne~~

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!
I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!
I don't think I will start a new fic because I want to finish with my other fics and then maybe start a new one later!! ^^

[mae0513]

OMG!!!!!

why....why jin have to die and poor kazu T___T

omedeto on finishing this~~~ ^____^v

[garnet_light]

Sorry, but that's how this story end ne~~
Thanks a lot! I'm so happy I finally managed to finish this fic!

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie ^__^

[dontstopmore]

*gasp*
oh no...
D=
poor kazu D= !!!!!

[garnet_light]

I don't know whether your reaction is good or bad dear, lol!
I hope you enjoyed this fic although I know you might have hated the ending >.<

[pochnaden]

Jin died. --and Kame became crazy.
It was sad but I think it's perfect. It was realistic and I loved it.
Thank you for this. This is one of the fics that's really unique in a way and is still beautiful up till the end. Congratulations! I pity both their families, though. ;___; Kame may be delusional but it's his way of absorbing everything. He went through a lot of hard times with Jin and this is his escape-route which happens in real life. THANK YOU!!! ^___^

[garnet_light]

YAAAY!! I'm so happy you loved it dear! *hugs*
Thanks a lot for your kind words! I'm glad that it motivated me to keep writing~~

Yeah, you're totally right!
I also think this ending is perfect for this story and glad to see many of you share me the same thought.
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!
Chuuuuuuuu~~

[pochnaden]

You will always be welcome. Your fics are always lovely to read. --just like this with an unexpected ending. ^_____^V

Be inspired, as always and take care! *hugs* <3

[garnet_light]

I'm so happy to hear that! <3
I will do my best in my other fics too!
Thanks, your comment definitely motivate and inspire me~~
*hugs u back*