[Fic] The Wrong Move - Ch21

Dec 16, 2010 01:26

Chapter 21

January, 2008

Pi: *eyes widen in shock* Toma?

Toma: Good morning *smiles*

Pi: *confused* am I dreaming?

Toma: What do you think? *giggles*

Pi: I am dreaming! Ugh *holding his head because of incredible pain* or maybe I’m starting to become delusional?

Toma: *laughs loudly* Go wash your face and come eat breakfast! There is ( Read more... )

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starg8fan_liz December 15 2010, 23:08:59 UTC
XD yay Kame hugged him ^__^ it's a start XD
looking forward to the next chap XD♥♥♥♥

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garnet_light December 15 2010, 23:39:21 UTC
Yes he did ^___^
it sure is a good start
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie *hugs*
will do my best to update soon~

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bellemelody December 16 2010, 00:09:51 UTC
thank you)) going to read)

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truongthuyquynh December 16 2010, 01:34:55 UTC
Oh, you left us at a critical cliff, author-san. D:
Cannot wait for the next chapter for their making-up. XD XD
Thanks for sharing this ne.

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sunflower_1108 December 16 2010, 01:53:50 UTC
>>>and without noticing, kame's leg moved on their own in hasty steps hugging jin from behind --->>>> omg, i'm so happy *grinning*
finally, tomapi back together, right???? ^~^
waiting what jin will do as soon as kazu hugged him??? *stupid grin*
thanks for sharing ^3^

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dorayaki_chan December 16 2010, 02:13:28 UTC
Yaaaaaaaay what the use of look back in anger right ???? So does it mean that this story is gonna end soon???

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