40,524. The Home Stretch

[garretelliot]

Well here is the next one folks and I'm almost home free.
As usual the cutline is there for a reason, if you are offended by same sex pairing and adult content, don't read past the cut.
If you do read past the cut tell me what you think and thanks to Dev and Jules who commented on the last entry.

Comments

Jack and Garret-train wreck waiting to happen!

[anonymous]

Great update-I love the analogy about the piece of candy!

Poor Jack!

I love how he handles Maggie-and I mourn for the results!

Good update-thanks for a very involving story!

What next?:)
jtbwriter

Re: Jack and Garret-train wreck waiting to happen!

[garretelliot]

You know maybe I should title it Anatomy of Disaster. Cause anyone can see this is not going to be pretty.

:)

[kaeleighjustice]

You're going to be done long before the end of the month even gets close to us! I'm so proud of you. I've never spewed anything out that fast!

:D

Now It's 46371

[garretelliot]

Spew is a good description and like most things spewed this one stinks (comparatively). After Nano, I'm doing a major re-write, trim it down pick up the pace. I think it has the potential of a juicy little melodrama. I just have to cut it down or at least work it through better. Hmmm, you know if I change the characters to originals, change a few details and re work the ending I have plotted, this could be an nice little angst fest to try and shop to the Danielle Steele type crowd. Except I don't know if there is a market for slash romance angst.