Comments | garretelliot: Word Total Is Now 17,882

garretelliot

Word Total Is Now 17,882

Nov 05, 2005 14:12

Okay after the 10,000 word dump I pulled on you guys I decided that I'd do smaller postings, because frankly that is alot to read at one sitting. This is again behind a cut because of adult content. I will restate my warnings. if you don't like to read pornographic material, don't go ther and if male/male relationships turn you off again don't go ( Read more... )

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devisun7 November 5 2005, 23:46:34 UTC

(stands and applauds)

BRAVO!!!! BRAVO!!!!!

Greetings From Slashy Angst Land garretelliot November 6 2005, 01:44:05 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. Trust me there is much more to come, possibly more than 50,000 words. It's like you said on the phone, I was worried over nothing.

Whoa-that was good! devisun7 November 6 2005, 04:13:03 UTC

Whoa-that update was very good-a little (blush) but I loved Jeanette and her words to her "baby boy". I just can't picture anyone calling
Slokum that-but it works!

Great flow-the hopeful romantic is just so pitiful-then Garret goes for it! What a story!

Okay-what next?:) LOL!

Jtbwriter

Re: Whoa-that was good! garretelliot November 6 2005, 04:40:00 UTC

I love writing Jeannette and she will be playing a major role later on in the story. She is however very Mary Sue-ish, it comes from years of being a major fag-hag myself and the inspiration of a friend. I used baby boy cause that's what I call my sweet buddy who is really sort of the inspiration for Jack in this, not so young but still very Jack. Fortunately my baby boy's 'Garret' didn't cause him the same kind of pain.

I'm glad that folks whose opinion I respect are enjoying this one, because frankly I think it's some of my best work as far as angst goes. I have to tell you I have wept over some of the sad parts so hard, I have had to stop writing from time to time to get rid of the headache it causes. I'm keeping a box of Kleenex and some Tylenol by my computer now and soldiering on though.