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desuta October 22 2010, 04:29:21 UTC
oh my god lore
shaking and crying
this was beautiful
A-AND
okay no lie after this sentence
>"Fudou had a weird feeling in his chest that felt a little bit like happiness."
I TEARED UP ;^;

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garrus October 22 2010, 04:46:31 UTC
That's my favorite sentence in the whole thing, haha. ;~; I'm glad you liked my fic omg

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desuta October 22 2010, 04:30:40 UTC
ALSO I LIKED KIDOU AND KUDOU'S BRIEF APPEARANCE
AND NICE DOLPHIN'S MENTION YEAAAAAH

and I agree with noon, I think you handled both really well ;w;/ y-you should definitely write more...

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garrus October 22 2010, 04:46:55 UTC
I HAD TO MENTION NICE DOLPHIN OWO

alfjslkfjaefrfsd thanks again I WILL! :D

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seisai October 22 2010, 05:13:14 UTC
"Even if Coach Kudou hadn't scared you into joining me, I would've made you do it somehow, Fudou. I'm not good at resisting a challenge."

O////////////////O TSUNAMI, OH.......

lmfao I love how Tsunami's attitude is contagious enough for Fudou to tolerate

SO CUTE

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garrus October 23 2010, 01:42:44 UTC
LMFAO I didn't want to make him too naughty because I feel like Tsunami wouldn't be like that, but hopefully this was enough. o//////o

Nobody can resist Tsunami, okay.

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napkins October 22 2010, 05:28:23 UTC
A STRAIGHT SAKUMA. I CAN'T EVEN.

also fffff I love both Fudou and Tsunami in this so much, I am just grinning like a fool.

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garrus October 23 2010, 01:44:02 UTC
THAT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE LINES AHAHAHAHA

Awww I'm glad. /)_;

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garrus October 23 2010, 01:44:56 UTC
Thank you! I actually wrote that part first and structured the rest of the fic around it, so I'm glad it was your favorite because it was the part I enjoyed writing the most. n_n I'm really flattered, thanks again! ;-;

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