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[gashiwaku]

title: no goodbyes
pairing: yunho/jaejoong
rating: pg
length: one-shot | 1002 words
genre: angst | fluff | au
warning: character death
a/n: this is based off of a play i wrote and very loosely based off of a poem i read called "no goodbyes" by paul monette.

Comments

[snow_meow]

So beautifully written and yet really sad.
But it's comforting that when you are to move on, you are coherent and basking in the warmth of your loved one.

[gashiwaku]

thank you for reading :)

[anonymous]

/crying. I'm tjvyxjq, so I'm commenting on your inbox.

[isimplicityy]

T____T so beautiful!
Jaeeeee -cries- Why must you go? Why?
-clings onto him- omg I absolutely loved how you portrayed Jaejoong's last moments. Rather than it being a sad occasion it was so normal and yet so sweet. Yunho is truly the perfect boyfriend and although Jaejoong is sick, Yunho never ever complained about it. He was always there through everything. And even after this, he'll be joining Jaejoong to be with him forever~ Absolutely wonderful.

Jaejoong's comparisons between himself and the flowers though really went straight to my heart. I wish I could hug him and convince him that it isn't true. You dud a wonderful job on your first fic. It's full of emotions and it really reflects how someone in Jae's position would feel. Kudos to you^^
Keep writing dear, you have a lot of talent in you (:

[gashiwaku]

thank you for reading. this is exactly how i wanted to portray these characters. i'll keep writing for sure!

[dilovesyunjae]

aish...love like this is so beautiful...

[onewaytrackk]

TT. Ah. That was really heartbreaking.

[gashiwaku]

;_; i know i'll try to write a funny fic next time! thanks for reading.