fic: growing a pair (part two)

[gasmsinc]

growing a pair
ryan lochte/michael phelps
nc17, 11827 words
warnings for depiction of male pregnancy, curse words, genderswap, mpreg

Comments

[kellerton]

oh my god. i've never had so many feelings over an mpreg fic before. GUH.

loved mp being particularly sassy while pregnant, totally true to form.

[gasmsinc]

thanks for reading. i'm glad it gave you emotional distress.

of course mp was sassy while pregnant the world would end if he didn't have his normal amount of sass.

[kellerton]

dude, totally. i was all ready for the lols but then when they were looking at the sonograms i was just like *melts*.

[aftereighteen]

HEY. you can't blame... oh wait, you can.

pfft. i am happy to take full responsibility for this. it's the best thing that happened since ryan putting his penis in michael's vagina and getting him pregnant.

if i ever stop laughing and crying and reconnect my brain and my fingers, i might tell you which bits i like best.

[gasmsinc]

i'm really glad you enjoyed it and thanks for holding my hand through it! i couldn't decide if i wanted it to be funny or really serious so i went with funny and somewhat serious???

[aftereighteen]

you're welcome. it totally worked. and you're one of the few people who writes men as men. i can't stand it when people use very feminine adverbs when writing guys, and make them like women with penises (which, i know you wrote a genderswap mpreg so this sounds really silly) but... your characters are very definitely guys. and they're not queeny and they're not guys who burst into tears or fucking giggles (that's the one word i can't stand being used in relation to men) every few seconds. you stay true to the personalities and er... whatever else they are.

fuck i'm shutting up. i stopped making sense several hundred words ago.