Comments | gasmsinc: fic: untitled baby fic

gasmsinc

fic: untitled baby fic

May 11, 2013 20:26

untitled baby fic
ryan lochte/michael phelps
nc17, 7128 words
warnings for mpreg

( Michael decides he wants another baby. )

fic: swimming rpf, fic: rating: nc17, fic: pairing: ryan lochte/michael phelps

Comments 3

thorne_scratch May 13 2013, 06:48:13 UTC

I have this bookmarked to read and I' looking forward to it, but quick question-- is there a chunk missing? Seems like it jumps in the middle of a sentence:

“FineNo,” he says, “no you cannot put your brother in the fire.”

gasmsinc May 13 2013, 17:02:45 UTC

Honestly I don't know what's wrong? I've tripled-checked my html and that entire section is in the html, but for some reason it's not showing up correctly on the page. I tried re-pasting everything, and the mistake is still showing up.

thorne_scratch May 15 2013, 00:57:30 UTC

Dunno. Maybe try removing the italics tag to see if that fixes it? Or copy and paste everything out, slap it in a plain text file to strip out the html, and try again.