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[gatorguy]

I sat in the dining hall thinking how bad this damn gyro tasted. Tarek just left and the conversation left a bad after taste in my mouth. I realized just how bad we really were in highschool. He always had this idea of how American schools included drugs everywhere and sex in the hallways. I laughed and said not quite, but after some thought, I

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Drama Mayne

[anonymous]

great story!

[akatiti]

definitely grabbed my attention. at first i'm like this crap is long...but i started reading and felt the need to keep going. twas scary and realistic to me...good descriptions, i could see it happening. good job. hehe

[anonymous]

good job Rod!!!! you kept me going. intense!! When can I read the next??

woo-hoo

[anonymous]

woahhhh. look at my lil hubby...writing short stories and stuff. I loved it!!! no really i did. u kno i rarely lie. great imagery, realistic thought processes, and a good micture of humor and drama. sniff. im so proud. i would change the part at the end wit the sunrise..a lil cliche. but soooooo good. im scared now tho... :-/

woo-hoo

[anonymous]

woahhhh. look at my lil hubby...writing short stories and stuff. I loved it!!! no really i did. u kno i rarely lie. great imagery, realistic thought processes, and a good micture of humor and drama. sniff. im so proud. i would change the part at the end wit the sunrise..a lil cliche. but soooooo good. im scared now tho... :-/
~~~Karima