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[gattman01]

Eyes like a stormwall
they seem to protect his mind from the outside
in reality they protect nothing
the city is empty

Comments

[thalionhiril]

Just thought I'd drop in and leave you some feedback - really like this. I know that it was written to represent something that you're not terribly happy about, but I like the words you chose (stormwall). My favorite line is the last... gives and eerie feeling.