Oh wow, I fell in love with all three. To be honest, I have no clue who the group/characters were in the first one, but I still read it because your style is breath taking and never disappoints. And it didn't! I adored their conversation, and the last couple of lines; he can see them along the lines of soohyun's lips. soohyun's fingertips. Your writing is beautiful.
The first Big Bang one was my favourite though. I can't articulate why but I just loved the feeling and descriptions, the fear mixed with lethargy and lsdfjhgjfk I don't know. You're awesome.
It surprised me when you said you read the first one without even knowing who they are but I'm really, really glad you like it. I honestly don't know what to say to this comment because it's everything lovely and you are lovely.
wow. I sort of fell in love with all three of these drabbles.
the first one: I'm new to the u-kiss fandom so I don't really know the dynamics of soohyun/kiseop but you wrote them beautifully.
the second: no one writes top/seungri even though their dynamics are amazing. seungri is the maknae who'd rather be the hyung while top wants to be the maknae instead of the hyung. their relationship is abusive and in some ways, seungri scares top which was obvious in the drabble. I enjoyed the little gri and the way you write seungri is perfect. he has numerous layers and I always love it when seungri's the one in control.
seungri slams the brakes hard enough to send them spinning in crazy circles, tires shrieking. I could hear the sound of the brakes in my head. you have a wonderful way with words.
the third: again, I love the way you characterized seungri. I haven't read good seungri-centric fics lately so thank you for this ♥
I'm new to the fandom too and I'm still struggling to grasp their characteristics. I don't think it's as coherent as I'd like them to be but I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless. Thank you.
And I really like the part of your comment on Top/Seungri, because that's how I see them. I think sometimes Seungri resents being the youngest in the group and I see him being rebellious to the fact in different ways. Which, when combined with Top's presence, can be quite dangerous. I'm not quite sure if I'm making any sense haha.
Thank you so, so much for your comment! You made my night! ♥
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Great Job Sweetie!
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! :D
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kiseop has always been a little slow, after all.
Awh... I just love that part. Kiseop is indeed a little bit slow sometimes ~ Makes him somuch adorable though ~
Love it <3
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Haha I'm not quite sure but boy looks like it. Thanks for reading and commenting. :)
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The first Big Bang one was my favourite though. I can't articulate why but I just loved the feeling and descriptions, the fear mixed with lethargy and lsdfjhgjfk I don't know. You're awesome.
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It surprised me when you said you read the first one without even knowing who they are but I'm really, really glad you like it. I honestly don't know what to say to this comment because it's everything lovely and you are lovely.
Thank you so much! ♥
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I don't quite understand the dynamic between Kiseop/Soohyun but the way you wrote it was so gorgeous, bb. Really.
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I don't understand it too actually but they can be adorable? Thank you for enjoying it thought! :D
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the first one: I'm new to the u-kiss fandom so I don't really know the dynamics of soohyun/kiseop but you wrote them beautifully.
the second: no one writes top/seungri even though their dynamics are amazing. seungri is the maknae who'd rather be the hyung while top wants to be the maknae instead of the hyung. their relationship is abusive and in some ways, seungri scares top which was obvious in the drabble. I enjoyed the little gri and the way you write seungri is perfect. he has numerous layers and I always love it when seungri's the one in control.
seungri slams the brakes hard enough to send them spinning in crazy circles, tires shrieking.
I could hear the sound of the brakes in my head. you have a wonderful way with words.
the third: again, I love the way you characterized seungri. I haven't read good seungri-centric fics lately so thank you for this ♥
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I'm new to the fandom too and I'm still struggling to grasp their characteristics. I don't think it's as coherent as I'd like them to be but I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless. Thank you.
And I really like the part of your comment on Top/Seungri, because that's how I see them. I think sometimes Seungri resents being the youngest in the group and I see him being rebellious to the fact in different ways. Which, when combined with Top's presence, can be quite dangerous. I'm not quite sure if I'm making any sense haha.
Thank you so, so much for your comment! You made my night! ♥
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