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[gavarilo]

When the rains came
and everyone rushed for cover
i stood there cold and wet
alone as i ran to find my way home
through streets that all looked the same
i needed something to show me the way
like a feeling that i was there
a sign that said 'you are here'
i was like a boat
going against the river
which cannot find its bank
and cannot join the sea

Comments

[aflowerforradha]

Very nice. :)

[dilkibaat]

that was pretty good
i knew who i was,
but i did'nt know where i belonged...
a lot people undergo this emotion but i have never seen a better worded one
tc

[gavarilo]

a lot people undergo this emotion but i have never seen a better worded one
hey thanks..its strange...how simple lines can bring out the exact feeling..

[anonymous]

I know it like the cold stab of winter
That Moment of Truth that dawns on you
but then that certain flickering flame of hope
that faint beacon of light that urges you to push forward
that fills your heart with a flood of unrestrained contentment