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canetr January 9 2011, 00:41:55 UTC
Wait, what happened to Harry? She was very sick in hospital when we first met John and Clara. Now it seems like she is all better. Or maybe I am just interpreting this incorrectly. I like the meeting with Mycroft and his attempt to bribe/test John. Those Holmes brothers.

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gaylarain January 9 2011, 00:47:09 UTC
You'll need to reread part one very carefully. I haven't said exactly what she has but still very sick.

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canetr January 9 2011, 00:54:24 UTC
For some stranhge reason, I read part 2 before part 1. Requiring a bone marrow transplant is a very serious illness and one that Harry cannot recover from quickly. On to the third date :-)

p.s. Does Sherlock know how to knock?

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chironstar January 9 2011, 01:16:17 UTC
Love Sherlock and Mycroft's meddling, and your John is so wonderful to read. ♥

Awesome story, can't wait for more! :D

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squidspawn January 9 2011, 03:41:03 UTC
I second that; your John really is such a delight. It really is so hard to find a well written John, most authors tend to really underestimate his character.

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trillsabells January 9 2011, 08:57:07 UTC
Read this last night but forgot to comment so I'm back! Hi! *waves*

I loved the bit where Mycroft said if Sherlock messed John up he'd pick up the pieces and keep him. People really are chess pieces to those two aren't they? Even if they do both recognise that John Watson is one of a kind.

Think your story is fascinating the way the two of them meet and start a relationship in such a... normal way. Well as normal as Sherlock can be. Wonder how long it will be before 'The Work' comes in and distracts Sherlock. Or until John gets involved in 'The Work'.

Am watching with interest!

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poweroffunk January 9 2011, 09:31:13 UTC
you sir, are a gentleman and a scholar.

i seriously love this XDXDXD write more soon! The Power Of FUNK compels you!!!

also, mycroft/john!element =Win

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