different when we kiss (1/1)

Jan 09, 2013 16:08

different when we kiss | liam/zayn (liam/danielle; slight louis/harry) | 9,000 | nc-17 | tw: sex???? | based on the song ‘call your girlfriend’ by robyn. liam is with danielle but can’t help his feelings for zayn, the misanthropic illustrator who lives next door. | unbeta’d, so sorry in advance for any mistakes. | for mon whom i promised this fic ( Read more... )

fic: one direction, liam/zayn, ziam

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catmus January 10 2013, 00:20:21 UTC
No feeling of pencil to paper, of ink or graphite or black lead to a canvas, could ever compare to Zayn’s tongue against Liam’s skin.

jesus. this was amazing. all of it. i love the way you characterize zayn.

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scseeker January 10 2013, 03:22:36 UTC
This story EEEEEEEEEE MY EMOTIONS. I think i love you. Their words are so beautiful. I'm so in love with your writing.

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chocopepsifloat January 10 2013, 09:53:33 UTC
" His temperature rises when he catches the boy undressing, and it’s an honest mistake the first time. And the third time. As well as the seventh. Honest."
so good! are you sure that was 9000 words? because i could keep reading your writing all day :].

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ruby_crowned January 10 2013, 11:15:47 UTC
blessssss im half in love w/ that song and this was beautiful babe.

liam's 'i'm scared' and zayn's self-doubt ugh nope.

and 'He’s always close enough to touch but far enough to miss.'

lovely <3

ziam may actually be the death of me

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meus_astrum January 11 2013, 23:32:56 UTC
this might possibly be the best ziam au i've ever read, completely serious. i was going to put a few of my favorite lines but i couldnt pick omg the whole story is just incredible. this was beautiful and deep and the characterization was incredible and everything about this is amazing i dont even know what to say.

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