Sugar Pain chap 14 multi-Gazette pairings

[gazerotica]

Chap : 14/ ?
Pairing : Reituki, OC/Ruki, Reita/Aoi (?), Uruha/Aoi (?)
Genre : angst, drama, smut
Rating : 15
Warning : angst, implied sex
Disclaimer : I don’t own them, I’m not affiliated, it’s all just fiction from my warped imagination.
Summary : Aoi is infatuated with Uruha but Uruha thinks he’s pathetic - that doesn’t stop him embarking on a dark

Comments

[minishimi]

FIRST!

[minishimi]

Yesssssss - Ruki time!!!

I really enjoyed this chapter even though it felt a little too short. But I can see that Ruki is having a really hard time moving on without Reita. I mean, he has a new boyfriend, but still wanted to be treated the same way Reita treated him. Had you expanded more on that, it would be very heart breaking.

I'm not saying it's bad! *flail* I really like this story...this is just a really short chapter...>"<

I'M STILL LOVING IT THOUGH.

=^.^=

[gazerotica]

I know this chapter, and the last, were a little short (neither of them hit 2000 words), but the next is much longer I promise. I just needed to get the others' points of view across before I return to ... well, you'll see! XD

I could have written so much more about Ruki and Haru but we'll see them again.

Thanks for the comment hun - I appreciate it x

[gazerotica]

Whoot! Shiny tiara of first-comment-ness to you! XD

[maunetjeret]

Ruki! I'm so glad to read this!
Reita you idiot.

[gazerotica]

lols

yep, that about sums things up XDD

[liraelx]

Damn, I was meaning to go to bed but this was just to intriguing to not read, however it is 2am, so I will comment properly tomorrow because I'm too sleepy now XP

[liraelx]

Mkay, so, poor Ruki, I feel so bad for him in this fic, and poor idiot Reita. I think this is my favourite chapter so far, you captured the feelings of trying to move on after such a long relationship so well.

[gazerotica]

Poor Ruki - I could have had him thinking in circles for hours. Let's face it, he's jumped into a new relationship way too soon and with dubious reasons - not like that never happens in real life!

Thanks hun xx

[worldballad]

Aw They miss each other
I really want to know how Ruki and Haru's relationship will end up.
Great job as usual!

[gazerotica]

Thank you xx

I feel sorry for Haru, he's got a lot to deal with in Ruki. We shall have to see how it goes ...

[unna_rainchaser]

How am I supposed to read this before going to school D: *runs to wash hair and dry it* Let's see how far I get.

[gazerotica]

How far did you get? XDD