[oneshot] an exercise in longing

Feb 11, 2015 00:06

Title: an exercise in longing
Pairing: b.i/yunhyeong
Rating: pg13
Genre: au, romance
Warnings: n/a
Author: gdgdbaby
Notes: american college au. after twenty years of uninterrupted single life, hanbin gets set up on a date. 2,615 words. tysm to intherubble for looking this over! ♥ aircrashes, this one's for you.

Hanbin's parallel parking job is total shit, which he blames on arriving half an hour late. )

fandom: ikon, length: oneshot, ship: b.i/yunhyeong, #fic

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aircrashes February 11 2015, 06:43:26 UTC
KAKAKAKAAKAKA SPOT.

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aircrashes February 11 2015, 07:19:41 UTC
heart eyes emoji!!!!

see. this is all it took.. I CAN LIVE THROUGH IKON FANDOM WITH THIS ONE FIC.

scream little robot boy going on his first date *^*
if the humans say it needs to be done this way, it can't be wrong!

"There had been something in Yunhyeong's face when he said it. It's completely possible Hanbin wanted to see something in Yunhyeong's face." flops around.. this line will torture me in the worst possible way ( ... )

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gdgdbaby February 23 2015, 20:38:48 UTC
LMAO ERICA YOU'RE SO CUTE TT i'm so glad you enjoyed this!!! and relieved that their relationship rang true to you in this story, despite my worries @__@ scream i knew i wanted hayi to be in this but i didn't want to give her the short end of the stick you know!!! she's so fun to write and i'm really happy you liked her lil scene :') definitely a callback to "the song... but the song......" lmfasldkfj awkward hanbin is the best, naturally u__u

scream. we'll see u__u

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yeolie February 11 2015, 06:45:01 UTC
"I have a right to be in this dorm! Jinhwan's my math tutor!"
CSREAM

"Bobby's best friend and Jinhwan's favorite dongsaeng, Hanbin felt pretty content being the platonic third wheel in their civil union"
TURNS UP NOSE, disgusting. eye emoji, cant wait for jinhwan to leave bobby for june

"If it doesn't turn out well, you can always come back and get a consolation blowjob from me."
OH?

hayi sounds so pretty and like she smells nice ;;. hayi date me instead. also i want sushi now

teenage boy hanbin thinking abt the guaranteed bj

THE CONFESSION SCENE WAS SO CHEESY. i mean ig most confession scenes are
this fade to black!!

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gdgdbaby February 23 2015, 20:39:54 UTC
LMFAO @ U one day i'll make you say bobhwan is cute

"also i want sushi now" wow ok that is truly a compliment now that i know you don't actually like sushi that much!!! myw ork here is done~

PLEASE IMAGINE YOUR OWN BLOWJOB SCENE AS A CODA TO THE END!!! :*

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dicktouch February 11 2015, 06:46:05 UTC
fkdnslkfnld lucy!!!!

Junhwe pushes back. "I have a right to be in this dorm! Jinhwan's my math tutor!" eye emoji BUT ALSO i thoroughly enjoyed the glimpses of jinhwan & bobhwan!! almost choked on my chips when i saw ucla lfkmd i cant believe "Sure," Jinhwan returns, making a face, "but Bobby would do anything." uwu bobhwan is so comforting to me.. Hanbin swallows, staring down at the menu, half of it covered by his huge plate of unfinished tempura roll. "Ah, I'm good, actually. But the check..." THIS ENTIRE SCENE I READ IT IN THE SAME WAY AS THAT RESTAURANT SCENE LFSDMDLKDKMSKDM hayi shutting him down n_______n boy needs some ppl around 2 shut him down C: huhu this yunbin was so cute and also so true to character ("be less subtle" RIGHT??? RIGHT) great job as usual <333 and ...... i cant believe u [fade to black] right at consolation blowjob!!!!!!! uwu whatever erica believes of me i do want to see more of these 2 together in the future~

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gdgdbaby February 23 2015, 20:41:20 UTC
LMFAO ACTUALLY i guess the whole point of this story was to transplant that restaurant scene from m&m into a completely different AU... skjfd why is awkward hanbin the best... i love it... ANYWAY i'm so pleased you liked this >o< i was so nervous about the characterization but i'm rly glad that it rang true to you!!! tysm for reading and commenting :*

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sinisterkids February 11 2015, 08:28:09 UTC
this is sooooo cute (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)(ღ˘⌣˘ღ)(ღ˘⌣˘ღ) i cant believe it ended there!!! but thank u 4 writing yunbin *satisfied*

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gdgdbaby February 23 2015, 20:42:03 UTC
;~~~; thank you so much!!! i was honestly debating including a full out bj scene but felt like it wouldn't really fit in with the vibe of the rest of the story but!! i'm super glad you enjoyed the fluff keke :*

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gdgdbaby February 23 2015, 20:42:39 UTC
TT i'm so glad you liked the story!!! ♥ thank you so much for reading and enjoying :3

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gdgdbaby February 23 2015, 20:43:39 UTC
TT i'm so glad you liked the story!!! ♥ thank you so much for reading and enjoying :3

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