The Games We Play [2/2]

[gdontop]

Comments

[laura_lovegd]

I guess that is what happens when you combine the best artist and writer, Just awesome!

[gdontop]

Awww, that's very nice! ^^

[gabs_yuuya]

Sad to know that blogger said such bad words about your awesome work with his edit. Please don't listen to them, your fic was awesome such a nice idea take from just a pic.

Thought you would just get them drunk and do it but you made a lovely back ground story that was delicious to read! ^^ Love how Hyun totally break Ji expectations and mine as well in such an awesome way. And them pleasuring each other was perfect.

Really cant wait to read more from you and especially from slow burn! ^^ Thank you for sharing!

[gdontop]

Thank you for commenting! I'mma work on 'Slow Burn' tonight ^^ yay!

[atenais_pala]

Actually I have to confess that I don't like threesome either, but since you didn't describe it and you just used this to tell us about his past I don't care. And I think that you made a great job with this fanfic.

It was really funny when Jiyong discovered that his huyng wasn't that innocent and naive. And the first chapter was really funny and sweet. Seunghyun was so sweet when he was drunk (but maybe he was overreacting a little).

I would love to read about their next morning. Thank you!

[gdontop]

I like threesomes when they're left as a one-time, purely sexual experience, and the writer doesn't try to make something more out of it. IRL, I find the emotional dynamics of triad *relationships* to be WAY too complex to sustain for any extended period of time. Someone's always gonna feel 'left out'...

Anyway! Glad you liked it^^ I'm just gonna keep this to a oneshot, so our lurid imaginations will have to suffice for 'the morning after', lol.

[atenais_pala]

Yes, I totally agree with you, someone always would feel "left out". But the reason why I don't like to read about "threesome" it's because I am a romantic and I want to read about them. But I don't care when writers have to use some situations to illustrate their characters and/or background. I wouldn't read a threesome one-shot, but I would be more tolerant if it was a chaptered, because sometimes the story needs this kind of situation (but I would 'skip' the scene).

Thank you again. I'm excited about "Slow Burn" and I and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Fighting!

[camouflagecat]

Wow, you write well, with describing and everything. Hot! I like how Jiyong had all these secret desires for his hyung and then in the end Seunghyun was playing with him after all ;)

[ext_1465482]

that was so hot, what a stunning way from jiyong to care of his hyung, love it