50 First Times - Time 45

Jul 13, 2012 21:22

Title: Time 45
Author: Gedry
Pairings: Gabriel/Kali
Rating: R
Word Count: 466
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me. I am making no profit from this fanfiction.
Beta: none
Spoilers: none
Warnings: none
Summary: Written for 50 first times - First time on Earth

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weee! neotoma July 14 2012, 03:11:14 UTC

He hates not knowing things.

Especially when he doesn't know more than the person he's dealing with...

By noon, Gabriel has gathered himself and follows the trail Kali has left behind her. It’s faint, maybe she doesn’t want to be found, but what he had with her last night is more of a connection than he has shared with any living being since diving from the skies of his home. He doesn’t want to lose it, not yet.

oh, poor lonely bunny, willing to curl up next to a wildfire because it's warm... not that I don't love Gabriel/Kali, because damn but they were entertaining together.

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Re: weee! gedry July 17 2012, 23:51:12 UTC
Yes they were. Thank you!!

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madamlurker July 14 2012, 05:36:05 UTC
You totally just wrecked me with that one.

It's hot and wrenching, and sort of makes me want to cuddle Gabe.

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gedry July 17 2012, 23:51:38 UTC
AWW YAY! mission accomplished!

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l_niania July 14 2012, 10:11:29 UTC
There's not only new 50 First Times, there's even Gabriel in them! You're totally amazing. :) But I think you broke my heart with this one... ;_;

Gabriel’s not quite ready to be totally alone.

Poor angel! Send him to me and I will hug him better... ♥ Still awesome character study you wrote here!

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gedry July 17 2012, 23:51:55 UTC
Thank you so much! *hugs*

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bourne_parker July 14 2012, 14:41:35 UTC

It’s like flying into the sun, it’s like being reborn into something new, something exposed but powerful. Kali wields her sexuality like Gabriel once handled his sword. She’s magnificent.

Wow, love so much love for this fic even though it breaks my heart into little bits.

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gedry July 17 2012, 23:52:17 UTC
Thank you so much!

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nicole_sill July 27 2012, 00:48:43 UTC
Goddess of life and destruction broke our little Gabriel? What a coup for her. Poor Gabriel with its broken heart. Very nice darling.

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gedry August 1 2012, 00:53:38 UTC
Thanks so much!

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