Comments | geek_tastic: a new experience

geek_tastic

a new experience

Jan 13, 2007 20:44

Kurogane was done with the damn mage’s flirting. They had found the feather in this world easy enough, and so Mokona had declared it was time for another party. A party of course meant alcohol. And that meant that Fai was even more flirtatious than usual. Currently, the children had passed out and been put to bed, and Fai was singing what he ( Read more... )

kurofai, crack, virgin!fai

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geek_tastic January 14 2007, 06:16:38 UTC

First comment! Yah!

Thanks for the compliment. I had to write virgin!fai because I hadn't seen it before either. It was driving me nuts!

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geek_tastic January 14 2007, 07:53:26 UTC

hopefully, yes. It all depends on if any of the other insane ideas in my head actually turn out on paper. :-)

Whee! chibikoji January 14 2007, 14:47:11 UTC

Very nice!
Hope you write more soon - I never would have believed that was a first attempt reading that!
^___^ and Virgin Fay - excellent concept ^___^

Re: Whee! geek_tastic January 14 2007, 17:51:06 UTC

thank you!!

elenatha January 14 2007, 17:09:31 UTC

Very sweet. It is rare to find fanfic with a blushing-virgin-Fai.
Although I must say that I go against the whole Celes deal that man don't have sex with other men. LOL, I mean no offense, but did you see that picture of Ashura-ou and Fai? The blond is practically sprawled on his king's lap! (which I LOVE thankyouverymuch)
Maybe you did intend on making more sense to the whole Fai-is-a-virgin deal and added that detail... if that's the case-- just ignore my previous comment ^^;
Overall, very nice and well structured for your first time. Hope to see more from you- oh! and welcome to the KxF group! :D

geek_tastic January 14 2007, 17:57:28 UTC

thanks for the feedback!

I love that pic as well, but I must say currently I subscribe to the school of thought that Ashura was more like a father figure (based off of that other pic with Fai as a child) I guess we will find out soon, eh? ^_^

As for the concept, it was meant as more of a crack story that what I think is really going on. I just thought, "wouldn't it be funny if Kuro finally pounces and Fai is totally inexperienced?" Because, I mean seriously, Fai....a virgin? Ri-ight.

annako January 14 2007, 19:34:42 UTC

The picture of Ashura and Fai might not mean anything at all knowing CLAMP; for example, in Legal Drug, there is at least 10 suggestive poses of Rikuo and Kudo in sexy poses and chains on top of each other; however in the main story, they are not lovers or anything of the sort.

Just saying. XD;

annako January 14 2007, 19:16:01 UTC

AHAHHA. XD That was beautifully written. XD Drunk!Virgin!Fai amuses me! And yes, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE KUROGANE, You've created a sex fiend. D=

Welcome to the comm indeed! I hope to read more from you! =3

geek_tastic January 14 2007, 19:51:32 UTC

Glad you liked!!

fengtianshi January 14 2007, 23:40:15 UTC

Yay! XD
I like the idea of a virgin Fay! Everyone think that he's some kind of sex bomb, and it's funny to discover that he's the opposite!
Great fic!^^

geek_tastic January 15 2007, 07:43:44 UTC

Well, he's a sex bomb that hasn't gone off yet.... XD

Thanks!