Drabble: 'Mixed Blessings' (Gibbs, Jack, OC's - G)

Sep 19, 2010 07:24

A double drabble, set after Harry & the Pirate V: Caribbean Quests. Many thanks to hereswith for looking it over.

(I'm having too much fun playing in the H&theP universe again, already wrote the first chapters of #6, Blood & Treasure!)

Gibbs watched from the quarterdeck, his heart torn... )

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sharklady35 September 19 2010, 15:39:19 UTC
That is a killer of a closing line.

Welcome to parenthood, Jack.

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geekmama September 19 2010, 15:43:11 UTC
Parenthood can be a real challenge, and a heartbreaker, sometimes. Thank you for reading and commenting!

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luvvycat September 19 2010, 16:31:25 UTC
Oh, my! Poor Jack, having to watch his fledgling Sparrow leave the nest. I can imagine how hard it is, for any parent, to see their child grow up, and go off on their own for the first time. It must be especially hard for Jack, knowing what peril the sea holds for a sailing man, and Tom already having had his share of life-threatening situations, at so young an age!

Take heart, Jack! He IS your son, after all, smart and brave and clever, and no doubt with that same scallywag luck that's seen you through many a tough time! (Of course, knowing how he was in his youth might not be a source of comfort, if young Tom is bound to follow in his father's footsteps!) ;-)

A lovely, and very moving, drabble! Well done (and I'm so glad to hear there's more H&P coming! Huzzah for H/J and their wonderful, extended "family"!) :-)

-- Cat

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geekmama September 20 2010, 03:03:06 UTC
I am all about the happy endings, as you know, but there's always some work to be done to get there. Thank you so much for reading and for the wonderful comments -- I'm so glad you enjoy this universe.

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Happy Talk Like a Pirate Day!! captaintish September 19 2010, 18:34:43 UTC
*covers eyes for spoilers* I haven't read the latest Harry story yet -- I have downloaded the entire series onto my Nook -- I want to reread the old ones before I read the new one. But I am delighted to hear you're already writing #6!!

Happy Talk Like a Pirate Day!!

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Re: Happy Talk Like a Pirate Day!! geekmama September 20 2010, 02:58:28 UTC
Not much in the way of spoilers here, but I'm thrilled that you enjoy these stories enough to reread them!

Happy TLAPD to you, too!! And thank you for leaving a comment here. :D

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pearlseed September 20 2010, 03:51:25 UTC
Okay, cool from the bottom of your story back to about hours later, right prior just makes me Gibbs' faternal twin in the heart department. Awwwww, damn--thank goodness it's Michael Owens--he'll remember how it was, how Jack was and he'll protect Tom like Jack took care of him ( ... )

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geekmama September 20 2010, 13:47:35 UTC
Thank you so much for your wonderful and lengthy comments. Change and separation do indeed stink, but Gibbs is right, as he often is. And all will be well, you know how I like those happy endings. ;)

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pearlseed September 21 2010, 13:08:07 UTC
Always got too wordy on my college papers--yep, affected my thinking you did. I also just read the tiny secret in your heading...really? Really done? Too cool for school! And yes, I know you've never marooned even when I tested. Thanks for the teaser, I love anticiiiiiiiipation!

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djarum99 September 20 2010, 04:16:50 UTC
Transitions in spades, necessary but oh so painful. I love your focus on their relationships in this series, mixed in with piratey adventure. Happy Talk Like a Pirate Day ♥

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geekmama September 20 2010, 13:52:13 UTC
A belated Happy TLAPD to you, too!

I love your focus on their relationships in this series, mixed in with piratey adventure.

I think that was what attracted us all to the PotC movies -- the relationships really are as important as the adventure.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm so glad you enjoy the Jack&HarryVerse.

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