Happy New Year, everyone!
Seven years ago today I posted my first story on the internet, the first seventeen chapters of Harry & the Pirate. I remember how excited and nervous I was, and how thrilled when PotC fans began reading and leaving comments. A few days later,
erinrua, captain of
blackpearlsails, found the story and added it to her great recs page, and then
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Now to go read..........
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Now, at nineteen, Tom knew himself to be well versed in most aspects of sailing, including the complicated mathematics required in modern navigation; was skilled enough (and ruthless enough) to be of use in an action, with weaponry that ranged from pistol to blade to sheer cunning and, on occasion, swift flight; was capable of emulating the ways of a gentleman (and, conversely, the ways of a blackguard, at need); and, he hoped, had the empathy and courage it took to be a good man, just like his father.
Amazingly like his father, in just about every way, it seems! Definitely a chip off the ol' block, is Tom Sparrow! ;-)
(there were about three dozen children of varying ages, from what Tom could make out - the king had an astonishing number of wives and concubines and took his marital obligations very seriously - Tom’s father said it made him tired just ( ... )
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I don't like to bog down the pace with a lot of description, so this is very good to hear. I'm pretty sure hereswith lets me know when something needs a bit more embellishment, but I worry about it nonetheless. When I was a kid that was a problem with me, too much detail, and I'd never get to the plot, lol -- not to mention I was writing with pen and paper, which is tortuous in itself. The computer is nothing short of a miracle as a tool for writing.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter with the Sparrow kids. I know that people looking for Jack and the other canon characters will probably be put off by such an opening, but it seemed a natural place to begin this tale.
Thank you so much for the detailed comments, you are so wonderful to do that for me, and for all of us.
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I'm thrilled to know you're reading and enjoying. This was such fun to write, almost like coming home in a way. Thank you very much for commenting.
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