Set two years post-Blood and Treasure, this is for
felaine who suggested that "Caroline needs some romance too...[and] I'd love to know how she'd react to the Caribbean."
This is also for the "twist" drabble challenge prompt at
blackpearlsails, though at over 3,000 words it's somewhat beyond a drabble.
Many thanks to my dear
hereswith for beta reading, editing, and helpful
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And thank you so much for the kind rec. ♥
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you made me feel sympathy for Caroline, which I wouldn't have thought. Before.
I was wondering if I could pull that off, actually. I'm so happy I was able to do it, with your expert help. Thank you so much for commenting, as well as for editing and all the suggestions, which improved the story so much. You're the best!!
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*does the Dance of Squee around the laptop*
Perfect for this pairing, realistic.
Love Harry kicking CJS at the start.
The scenes you described from the wedding, Caroline bitching about housekeeping at Sera's wedding; I can just imagine her doing that and Harry blasting her.
Lucky Caroline lived to enjoy herself later.
Excellent work, all your devoted fangirls enjoy this world so much.
Felaine
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The scenes you described from the wedding, Caroline bitching about housekeeping at Sera's wedding; I can just imagine her doing that and Harry blasting her.
I was wondering if I could think of something that would fit the unspecified "falling out" I wrote into the first few paragraphs, but that scenario occurred rather easily. *g*
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, here and all through B&T.
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Now that's a compliment of the highest order and you have me blushing here. I suppose I should try a short story or two, just to see if I can write something original, lol! I've been writing fanfiction almost exclusively since I was a little kid.
I'm so happy you enjoyed this. I'll be writing a few more "deleted scenes" and fill-ins, so if you have one you'd like to see please let me know. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
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Harry and Caroline do have certain things in common -- and maybe association with George will continue to have a good influence on Aunt Caroline. *g*
Thank you, again, for the wonderfully detailed comments.
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